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Okay I changed the idea of the story so the ages would fit better for the site.

I was thinking of a story about incest. Have a boy who is in his early 20s, and have him be the main character. He would have a half sister who is anywhere from 2 to 5 years older than him. He has the hots for his sister but she turns him down. While she is off to college their mother says that her long lost niece is coming to town. The new relative looks a lot like both his mother and sister. But she is about his age, maybe a half to a year younger. The boy is sexually frustrated that he easily falls to her seductions. We eventually find out that the girl was either his mother or sister brought there from the past. We find out that the girl ended up getting pregnant. So if it was his mother we find out that his older sister is his daughter. If it was his sister we find out that she had been sent away for a year, so she could keep the pregnancy from her brother. Either way the story goes after the sister comes back to visit from college she has sex with the brother and gets pregnant.
 
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I believe anything connected to minors is prohibited here, SuperWill19. Maybe you'd consider removing this request or revamping it so there are no questions concerning underage portrayals.
 
Yep, no under age sex allowed here. Everyone has to be 18 or older to have sex. Even if you're a time traveling alien from Galafrie(sp).
 
My description does say mid to late teens. Some of the story could take place during the mid teens maybe in flashback but no sex takes place. Or Have him 18 or 19 years old. I phrased it the way I did so the author could pick the age the character was. I wasn't saying I want the characters to be 13 - 15. Is that the only reason everyone is treating this story like people treated the Grinch in the Jim Carrey movie?
 
Myikael said:
I believe anything connected to minors is prohibited here, SuperWill19. Maybe you'd consider removing this request or revamping it so there are no questions concerning underage portrayals.
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How do we remove a request?
 
About age: Laurel says humans under 18, and aliens who LOOK like under-18 humans, can't be involved in sex here, other than a general description like "I was raped at 14, a mother at 15, and destroyed at 17" with no further details.

About time-traveling relatives: Two stories immediately come to mind. Robert Heinlien's classic ALL YOU ZOMBIES has a narrator who is his own mother, father, and recruiter. (He had some sex-change surgery in there.) The other is CHERRY DOES THE TIME-WARP in CHERRY POPTART #14 (Last Gasp Comix, 1989). Cherry travels into the past to turn her naive mother into a slut so she (Cherry) can be conceived and born. THAT is the hot time-travel-incest gimmick IMHO. Multiple variants of that could be written, where a modern offspring (either gender) must travel back to corrupt their parent (either gender) to make sure that sperm hits ovum. And if they end up being their own mother or father, so much the better.
 
Just thought of this idea:

A family (father, mother, & 18-year old son) moves back East and move into the father's old family home, a large Victorian that his family has continuously owned and lived in since 1855. One day, the son is exploring in the attic and finds an old trunk with a box of photos inside. One in particular stopped him in his tracks. It was a daguerreotype of a couple. A beautiful woman with raven-black hair and a young man that looked exactly like the 18-year old.

He rushes downstairs to show his father and asks him who they were. The father responds, "that was your great-great grandparents, Annabelle and Michael. We named him after you."

The 18-year old is obsessed over the daguerreotype, especially obsessed over his great-great grandmother. He has this primal attraction towards her.

One day the son comes home and he rushes to get inside. There is a summer shower soaking him to the bone as he dashes up the steps. He slips on the rain-soaked top step and falls backwards back down, his head hitting the ground with a painful thud. He doesn't know how long he was on the ground but he realizes that it's not raining anymore and he doesn't feel wet. He feels someone nudging him and asking if he's all right? As the 18-year old slowly opens his eyes, his eyesight slowly comes into focus to see his beautiful great-great grandmother kneeling over him with a look of concern on her face.
 
Mello_SixtyNine said:
Just thought of this idea:

A family (father, mother, & 18-year old son) moves back East and move into the father's old family home, a large Victorian that his family has continuously owned and lived in since 1855. One day, the son is exploring in the attic and finds an old trunk with a box of photos inside. One in particular stopped him in his tracks. It was a daguerreotype of a couple. A beautiful woman with raven-black hair and a young man that looked exactly like the 18-year old.

He rushes downstairs to show his father and asks him who they were. The father responds, "that was your great-great grandparents, Annabelle and Michael. We named him after you."

The 18-year old is obsessed over the daguerreotype, especially obsessed over his great-great grandmother. He has this primal attraction towards her.

One day the son comes home and he rushes to get inside. There is a summer shower soaking him to the bone as he dashes up the steps. He slips on the rain-soaked top step and falls backwards back down, his head hitting the ground with a painful thud. He doesn't know how long he was on the ground but he realizes that it's not raining anymore and he doesn't feel wet. He feels someone nudging him and asking if he's all right? As the 18-year old slowly opens his eyes, his eyesight slowly comes into focus to see his beautiful great-great grandmother kneeling over him with a look of concern on her face.
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I like that story. So is it on this site?
 
Mello_SixtyNine said:
One day the son comes home and he rushes to get inside. There is a summer shower soaking him to the bone as he dashes up the steps. He slips on the rain-soaked top step and falls backwards back down, his head hitting the ground with a painful thud. He doesn't know how long he was on the ground but he realizes that it's not raining anymore and he doesn't feel wet. He feels someone nudging him and asking if he's all right? As the 18-year old slowly opens his eyes, his eyesight slowly comes into focus to see his beautiful great-great grandmother kneeling over him with a look of concern on her face.
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I see uncertainty-ambiguity here. Did he really travel back, in mind and/or body, or is he hallucinating after suffering a concussion on worse? How does he adjust to cultural differences of the earlier era? If he physically traveled back, is he stuck there? Is he susceptible to diseases of the time including STDs? Does he write I'M MY OWN (great-great)-GRANDPA?

Thoughts & possibilities (not necessarily connected):

* He awakens to the lovely face. His head injury is such that he can't speak at first. He is mistaken for a simpleton. He must make efforts to show he's not a dummy.

* If he physically traveled, he's very oddly-dressed if wearing modern clothes. If he traveled mentally, then no problem -- he's just possessing g-g-gramp's body.

* After the loving liaison, he returns to today. He finds some of g-g-gramp's remains; DNA tests prove he IS g-g-gramps. Does he return to the past to live out his days there? How?

Historical note: The commercial daguerreotype era was roughly 1840-1860. Daguerreotypes were expensive luxury items. Tintypes were much less costly and more common; the tintype era was mainly about 1860-1880 although they still proliferated into the early 1900s, especially in poor rural areas.

Generational note: 20 years to a generation is the usual calculation, but it could be stretched to 25 years. If the story's NOW is 2015 and the image is a late tintype from 1890, we're looking at 125 years, at least 5 generations. So our guy is dealing with his great-great-great-grandparents at least.

Put these together. If the McGuffin (the image) is a daguerreotype, the implications are 1) the family was very well-to-do, 2) probably urban, and 3) it's a pre-US-Civil-War timeframe. If it's a tintype, then 1) the family was no more than mid-middle-class if before 1870, and 2) the later the year, the poorer and more rural the family. By 1870, portraits printed on photo paper were more common for the propertied classes. If the image dates from just 4 generations (80-100 years) before NOW, the McGuffin is probably on paper.

Those are the kinds of details I notice.
 
Hypoxia said:
I see uncertainty-ambiguity here. Did he really travel back, in mind and/or body, or is he hallucinating after suffering a concussion on worse? How does he adjust to cultural differences of the earlier era? If he physically traveled back, is he stuck there? Is he susceptible to diseases of the time including STDs? Does he write I'M MY OWN (great-great)-GRANDPA?

Thoughts & possibilities (not necessarily connected):

* He awakens to the lovely face. His head injury is such that he can't speak at first. He is mistaken for a simpleton. He must make efforts to show he's not a dummy.

* If he physically traveled, he's very oddly-dressed if wearing modern clothes. If he traveled mentally, then no problem -- he's just possessing g-g-gramp's body.

* After the loving liaison, he returns to today. He finds some of g-g-gramp's remains; DNA tests prove he IS g-g-gramps. Does he return to the past to live out his days there? How?

Historical note: The commercial daguerreotype era was roughly 1840-1860. Daguerreotypes were expensive luxury items. Tintypes were much less costly and more common; the tintype era was mainly about 1860-1880 although they still proliferated into the early 1900s, especially in poor rural areas.

Generational note: 20 years to a generation is the usual calculation, but it could be stretched to 25 years. If the story's NOW is 2015 and the image is a late tintype from 1890, we're looking at 125 years, at least 5 generations. So our guy is dealing with his great-great-great-grandparents at least.

Put these together. If the McGuffin (the image) is a daguerreotype, the implications are 1) the family was very well-to-do, 2) probably urban, and 3) it's a pre-US-Civil-War timeframe. If it's a tintype, then 1) the family was no more than mid-middle-class if before 1870, and 2) the later the year, the poorer and more rural the family. By 1870, portraits printed on photo paper were more common for the propertied classes. If the image dates from just 4 generations (80-100 years) before NOW, the McGuffin is probably on paper.

Those are the kinds of details I notice.
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When you suggested traveling just by his mind it made me think of the old tv series Quantum Leap. The main character would leap from life to life and through time. His mind or spirit or what ever would leave his body and go into someone else's body. And whoever he became would leap into his body.
 
Mello_SixtyNine said:
Nope. It just popped into my head after reading the original post.
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I do like the story but Having someone travel back in time and becoming their own ancestor has always been a very strange concept to me. I've never exactly been a fan of it but I don't hate the idea, it is kind of interesting at the same time. It's kind of weird how my mind works some times.. I really do like your idea though. I would love to read it if you work it out.
 
Mello_SixtyNine said:
Just thought of this idea:

A family (father, mother, & 18-year old son) moves back East and move into the father's old family home, a large Victorian that his family has continuously owned and lived in since 1855. One day, the son is exploring in the attic and finds an old trunk with a box of photos inside. One in particular stopped him in his tracks. It was a daguerreotype of a couple. A beautiful woman with raven-black hair and a young man that looked exactly like the 18-year old.

He rushes downstairs to show his father and asks him who they were. The father responds, "that was your great-great grandparents, Annabelle and Michael. We named him after you."

The 18-year old is obsessed over the daguerreotype, especially obsessed over his great-great grandmother. He has this primal attraction towards her.

One day the son comes home and he rushes to get inside. There is a summer shower soaking him to the bone as he dashes up the steps. He slips on the rain-soaked top step and falls backwards back down, his head hitting the ground with a painful thud. He doesn't know how long he was on the ground but he realizes that it's not raining anymore and he doesn't feel wet. He feels someone nudging him and asking if he's all right? As the 18-year old slowly opens his eyes, his eyesight slowly comes into focus to see his beautiful great-great grandmother kneeling over him with a look of concern on her face.
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Why does this make me think of one of those porn vids from the late 80's spoofing a sitcom like the Hornymooners or when Ron Jeremy played Fred Flintstone?

It could be called A Conneticut Hornball in Great Grandma spoofing the Twain story with a similar plot line.
 
Hypoxia said:
I see uncertainty-ambiguity here. Did he really travel back, in mind and/or body, or is he hallucinating after suffering a concussion on worse? How does he adjust to cultural differences of the earlier era? If he physically traveled back, is he stuck there? Is he susceptible to diseases of the time including STDs? Does he write I'M MY OWN (great-great)-GRANDPA?

Thoughts & possibilities (not necessarily connected):

* He awakens to the lovely face. His head injury is such that he can't speak at first. He is mistaken for a simpleton. He must make efforts to show he's not a dummy.

* If he physically traveled, he's very oddly-dressed if wearing modern clothes. If he traveled mentally, then no problem -- he's just possessing g-g-gramp's body.

* After the loving liaison, he returns to today. He finds some of g-g-gramp's remains; DNA tests prove he IS g-g-gramps. Does he return to the past to live out his days there? How?

Historical note: The commercial daguerreotype era was roughly 1840-1860. Daguerreotypes were expensive luxury items. Tintypes were much less costly and more common; the tintype era was mainly about 1860-1880 although they still proliferated into the early 1900s, especially in poor rural areas.

Generational note: 20 years to a generation is the usual calculation, but it could be stretched to 25 years. If the story's NOW is 2015 and the image is a late tintype from 1890, we're looking at 125 years, at least 5 generations. So our guy is dealing with his great-great-great-grandparents at least.

Put these together. If the McGuffin (the image) is a daguerreotype, the implications are 1) the family was very well-to-do, 2) probably urban, and 3) it's a pre-US-Civil-War timeframe. If it's a tintype, then 1) the family was no more than mid-middle-class if before 1870, and 2) the later the year, the poorer and more rural the family. By 1870, portraits printed on photo paper were more common for the propertied classes. If the image dates from just 4 generations (80-100 years) before NOW, the McGuffin is probably on paper.

Those are the kinds of details I notice.
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Most people wouldn't know these things. I don't even know what a daguerreotype is. Never heard that term before.

To keep the timeline, make this a period peice. They family owned the house back east, but par tof the family headed west when fortues fell, and became sharecroppers. Then teh dustbowl 1936-40 came and destroyed their livlihood. With nowhere else to go they went back to the antcesteral home to try and find work. while looking for items to sell to buy food etc... the image of what ever kind is found.... Then instead of being over a century it'll only be 30-50 years. Things won't be as foreign and diseases wouldn't have changed that much in those few years.
 
Ldy_Sea said:
Most people wouldn't know these things. I don't even know what a daguerreotype is. Never heard that term before.

To keep the timeline, make this a period peice. They family owned the house back east, but par tof the family headed west when fortues fell, and became sharecroppers. Then teh dustbowl 1936-40 came and destroyed their livlihood. With nowhere else to go they went back to the antcesteral home to try and find work. while looking for items to sell to buy food etc... the image of what ever kind is found.... Then instead of being over a century it'll only be 30-50 years. Things won't be as foreign and diseases wouldn't have changed that much in those few years.
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So then he would be his own grandpa?
 
Hypoxia said:
........ Robert Heinlien's classic ALL YOU ZOMBIES has a narrator who is his own mother, father, and recruiter. (He had some sex-change surgery in there.) .......
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Heinlein had almost a fetish about solipsism stories. Lazarus Long alone impregnated lots of his own relatives via time travel, including boning his own mother while his pre-teen self slept peacefully nearby.
 
Carnevil9 said:
Heinlein had almost a fetish about solipsism stories. Lazarus Long alone impregnated lots of his own relatives via time travel, including boning his own mother while his pre-teen self slept peacefully nearby.
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Where can we find those stories? Is there a way you can tell me without getting in trouble and people saying it's spamming this page?
 
SuperWill19 said:
Where can we find those stories? Is there a way you can tell me without getting in trouble and people saying it's spamming this page?
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They are not erotica, and as far as I know, not online. The stories I'm thinking of are in a sort-of collection called "Time Enough For Love." Most of it is science fiction, but with lots of sexy twists.
 
Carnevil9 said:
They are not erotica, and as far as I know, not online. The stories I'm thinking of are in a sort-of collection called "Time Enough For Love." Most of it is science fiction, but with lots of sexy twists.
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TEFL is a beautiful mess, written when RAH was suffering from a brain ailment. Many interesting episodes kludged together, and like his other works of that era, in dire need of an editor. Many sexy sub-stories in TEFL, also the brilliant NOTEBOOKS OF LAZARUS LONG. Any good used book store should have the paperback edition for a couple bucks.

Keep in mind that the young RAH had an 'open' marriage, threw swap parties, was married to a practicing witch, and ferociously hid all that because of his rep as a writer for juveniles. Sex permeated his stories.

BTW Carny, are you implying (in another thread here) that my pieces are not realistic? Some of them are straight reporting. Well, not the banana slug story, but most others. Much more realistic than I-gotta-fuck-Mom/Dad-by-sundown or footlong cock-dogs. Of course, I have a story plotted with human + giant preying mantis sex, but it'll be as real as possible.
 
Carnevil9 said:
They are not erotica, and as far as I know, not online. The stories I'm thinking of are in a sort-of collection called "Time Enough For Love." Most of it is science fiction, but with lots of sexy twists.
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Still sounds good.
 
Hypoxia said:
......BTW Carny, are you implying (in another thread here) that my pieces are not realistic? Some of them are straight reporting. Well, not the banana slug story, but most others. Much more realistic than I-gotta-fuck-Mom/Dad-by-sundown or footlong cock-dogs. Of course, I have a story plotted with human + giant preying mantis sex, but it'll be as real as possible.
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I think you answered your own question.
 
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