Feedback on Spanking Story

Hi, this is a story of a couple of Indian housemaids spanking their employer's adult son, who is a submissive. I am looking for review/feedback of Chapter 4, as I am now writing Chapter 5 and 6 and needed some story ideas.

Link: www.literotica.com /s/ indian-maid-spanks-me-ch-04

If the above links don't work, my author name is "spankedboy" and story is titled "Indian Maid Spanks Me Ch. 04".

Thanks,

Tarek

Your link doesn't work. It just directs us to the site's home page. Can you post a proper link?

elfin_odalisque said:

Your link doesn't work. It just directs us to the site's home page. Can you post a proper link?

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Hi, the forum is garbling the links. I have linked to my stories in my signature though.