Emirus
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My second story “Sandstone Cottage” has just been published so once again I’m asking for constructive advice please. The criticisms about “Cherry” seemed to be in respect of grammar; punctuation; and my selecting the wrong category. I acknowledge all that and have attempted to improve. I also took what I believe was a sensible decision and sought advice as to which category.
I believe that this story is better than my first and I want my third story to be better than this one. I don’t expect the standard of my writing to be up to the standard of more experienced writers but I would like to think that might be the case one day.
https://www.literotica.com/s/sandstone-cottage
I believe that this story is better than my first and I want my third story to be better than this one. I don’t expect the standard of my writing to be up to the standard of more experienced writers but I would like to think that might be the case one day.
https://www.literotica.com/s/sandstone-cottage