PaigeMcAbee
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I'd appreciate any advice offered on using text messages in a story. To date, I've summarized them in the narrative but think the actual messages would have more impact as part of the dialogue.
"Where are you?" John texted
"Where are you?" John asked in his text.
Both examples seem wordy and lack flow. Also, the replies to John present a challenge because a constant repetition of the words "text, texted, or text messaged" is annoying.
Would italics be used on this part of dialogue?
I searched the threads but couldn't find the answer.
Thanks for your assistance.
"Where are you?" John texted
"Where are you?" John asked in his text.
Both examples seem wordy and lack flow. Also, the replies to John present a challenge because a constant repetition of the words "text, texted, or text messaged" is annoying.
Would italics be used on this part of dialogue?
I searched the threads but couldn't find the answer.
Thanks for your assistance.