Emirus
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This is my third story and I wasn’t going to start a thread about it but someone said I should so here goes. It’s entirely different from the first two, which were in NonCon, this being in Romance and seems to be doing fairly well. But it does seem sensible to ask the same writers who commented on my first two stories to critique this one.
https://www.literotica.com/s/early-one-mourning
https://www.literotica.com/s/early-one-mourning