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Old 02-20-2019, 08:30 PM   #51
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WoW! We're allowed to use bad words on this site?
Go look in Erotic poetry, you'll find plenty!
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Old 02-21-2019, 09:56 AM   #52
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The owner of this whole site is also a poet and I'm betting she'll disagree with you on that!
That seems to be to be pretty determinative! (which btw, does not spell check, but I like the word anyway.)

I am wayyyyyyy behind. and I also made the mistake of starting another thread in a different forum - in hindsight, I should not have done that. In any case, crazy to say this, I'm really attracted to this group and hope I can become a member here.
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Old 02-21-2019, 09:58 AM   #53
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Everything reads better with a glass of good red?
TWO glasses!!!
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Old 02-21-2019, 10:11 AM   #54
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Go look in Erotic poetry, you'll find plenty!
I have more recently written some of that. I was joking, but I'm probably too new for anyone to know me well enough to get that.
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Old 02-21-2019, 10:24 AM   #55
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Free Verse

Iíll be curt and terse: I hate free verse
My poetry without rhyme a waste of my time
Iíll even be frank; I detest verse that is blank
Unless Ė this I confess, it isnít just a mess.
It seems that free verse gets worse and worse
Art thatís unconfined needs a subtle mind
The brain of Homer, or some ancient moaner
Regretting glories past, or reliving a fast.
Poetry requires skill, say what you will
Shape and rhyme, even metre no crime
Yet in this exercise, all must I exorcise
Trying to prove all, to gain tutorís approval.
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Old 02-21-2019, 05:11 PM   #56
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Free Verse

Iíll be curt and terse: I hate free verse
My poetry without rhyme a waste of my time
Iíll even be frank; I detest verse that is blank
Unless Ė this I confess, it isnít just a mess.
It seems that free verse gets worse and worse
Art thatís unconfined needs a subtle mind
The brain of Homer, or some ancient moaner
Regretting glories past, or reliving a fast.
Poetry requires skill, say what you will
Shape and rhyme, even metre no crime
Yet in this exercise, all must I exorcise
Trying to prove all, to gain tutorís approval.
Applause, lovely to see you Ogg
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Blessed are the cracked for it is they that let in the light
They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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Old 02-23-2019, 01:50 PM   #57
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i have a question!

is there an existing iso blurt thread on the poetry boards? i thought there was one, once, but can't find it.
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Old 02-23-2019, 02:44 PM   #58
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i have a question!

is there an existing iso blurt thread on the poetry boards? i thought there was one, once, but can't find it.
This is one I found:

http://forum.literotica.com/showthre...ighlight=blurt
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Old 02-23-2019, 03:21 PM   #59
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Free Verse

Iíll be curt and terse: I hate free verse
My poetry without rhyme a waste of my time
Iíll even be frank; I detest verse that is blank
Unless Ė this I confess, it isnít just a mess.
It seems that free verse gets worse and worse
Art thatís unconfined needs a subtle mind
The brain of Homer, or some ancient moaner
Regretting glories past, or reliving a fast.
Poetry requires skill, say what you will
Shape and rhyme, even metre no crime
Yet in this exercise, all must I exorcise
Trying to prove all, to gain tutorís approval.
Ogg I love this. Technically all my verse is free verse even those that rhyme I am yet to find anyone who will pay

I am a worrier poet
Anxiety I just know it
I have no poetic license
Worry rhymes are nonsense

Like other would jabber with finesse
Harder I try the more I regress
Tried to woo a lady with rhyme
Was working until the time

Poor typing she said no
Fell foul of innuendo
The pen is mightier than the sword
Missing space different word

She decided to prove me wrong
Ran away or wouldn't be as long
She challenged me to a swordfight
With the smaller weapon I took fright

Inspired by classic wondered lonely as a clod
Famous lines I trampled and trod
So now i rhyme with reticence
Am just a fool that is my defence

Under a section of the equality act
Fools can rhyme and not retract
That's what make poetry cool
No discrimination against a fool
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Old 02-23-2019, 04:17 PM   #60
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cheers, mr ogg

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Ogg I love this. Technically all my verse is free verse even those that rhyme I am yet to find anyone who will pay

I am a worrier poet
Anxiety I just know it
I have no poetic license
Worry rhymes are nonsense

Like other would jabber with finesse
Harder I try the more I regress
Tried to woo a lady with rhyme
Was working until the time

Poor typing she said no
Fell foul of innuendo
The pen is mightier than the sword
Missing space different word

She decided to prove me wrong
Ran away or wouldn't be as long
She challenged me to a swordfight
With the smaller weapon I took fright

Inspired by classic wondered lonely as a clod
Famous lines I trampled and trod
So now i rhyme with reticence
Am just a fool that is my defence

Under a section of the equality act
Fools can rhyme and not retract
That's what make poetry cool
No discrimination against a fool
lolol
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Old 02-23-2019, 05:55 PM   #61
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Ogg I love this. Technically all my verse is free verse even those that rhyme I am yet to find anyone who will pay

I am a worrier poet
Anxiety I just know it
I have no poetic license
Worry rhymes are nonsense

Like other would jabber with finesse
Harder I try the more I regress
Tried to woo a lady with rhyme
Was working until the time

Poor typing she said no
Fell foul of innuendo
The pen is mightier than the sword
Missing space different word

She decided to prove me wrong
Ran away or wouldn't be as long
She challenged me to a swordfight
With the smaller weapon I took fright

Inspired by classic wondered lonely as a clod
Famous lines I trampled and trod
So now i rhyme with reticence
Am just a fool that is my defence

Under a section of the equality act
Fools can rhyme and not retract
That's what make poetry cool
No discrimination against a fool

Yes, you can do it too! Well done.
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