Trixareforkids
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just porn
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bogusagain
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a look of stretched chewing gum
sweet meat on bone, a rack of ribs
fried eggs sunny side up, a downy peach
for someone with a famine victim figure
she looks like a mighty fine feast
sweet meat on bone, a rack of ribs
fried eggs sunny side up, a downy peach
for someone with a famine victim figure
she looks like a mighty fine feast
Sabina_Tolchovsky
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Swirling cinnamon sugared lips,
with cold milk kisses;
even breakfast makes me want to fuck you.
with cold milk kisses;
even breakfast makes me want to fuck you.
Have you ever spent the time
to tease and please a woman
to truss her down
and indulge in her
the taste, to see her writhe
to test her limits with textures
on flesh
maybe trace a poem on her clit
With your tongue, something
to make her wet
then whisper it in her ear
while she begs to be finished
A spank here or there
To partake of her wholly
as each orgasm slicks her
Walls ready for the moment
of your own entrance
So she may indulge in feeling you
fill her numb her from all
that swirls in her head
allow her to lose control
for once take her mind from
her so she can be free
Hmmm not what I was expecting when I started.....
to tease and please a woman
to truss her down
and indulge in her
the taste, to see her writhe
to test her limits with textures
on flesh
maybe trace a poem on her clit
With your tongue, something
to make her wet
then whisper it in her ear
while she begs to be finished
A spank here or there
To partake of her wholly
as each orgasm slicks her
Walls ready for the moment
of your own entrance
So she may indulge in feeling you
fill her numb her from all
that swirls in her head
allow her to lose control
for once take her mind from
her so she can be free
Hmmm not what I was expecting when I started.....
Tsotha
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It better not be a haiku, then.
Haha why not, its about the tease of sensation
or do you mean trying to whisper something like that in her ear 
Tsotha
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Haha why not, its about the tease of sensation
Well, I mean, it's a bit too short, right? So, perhaps a haiku booklet will do.
butters
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It better not be a haiku, then.
Haha why not, its about the tease of sensation
Well, I mean, it's a bit too short, right? So, perhaps a haiku booklet will do.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAaaahahahahahahahaa
I normally count them on my fingers lol, but I'm sure if I stopped to ask for a critique mid business she wouldn't see the funny side of it
butters
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*so larfing here*I normally count them on my fingers lol, but I'm sure if I stopped to ask for a critique mid business she wouldn't see the funny side of it
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Isn't amazing when a poem just sort of writes itself?
I can almost feel it forming as you wrote it.....awesome....
Trixareforkids
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Happens to me all the time. Twice today in fact. I submitted one of them, Riding Free. The other I'm still pondering.
Trixareforkids
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It seems you decided to go ahead and write something after that comment on Tod's poem. Damn. I approve.
We should definitely create that thread.
butters
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Trixareforkids
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It seems you decided to go ahead and write something after that comment on Tod's poem. Damn. I approve.
Well then... LOL dooo it!
I'm pretty sure Todski and HoneyAdored would have something to contribute.
The way a stare stops you
emergency brakes flipped
stutter to a grinding halt
a smile curls at the corner of your lip
eyes , the way they won't look away
as if he sizes you up for a feast
you glance at the ground
flip hair from your forehead
to try gather a sense of self
but his eyes
the aura of self assurance
he raises his hand
in silent command
a demand of his masculine essence
though you are mentally screaming in protest
at this indignation
there is something
about his hand
the way he dares
his eyes stare
take it and let him pull
you head long into
a stained memory
that even now makes you blush
flushed and wonder how
with just a look
he was able to
fly through your defenses
and take you
to places you haven't been before
or since.
emergency brakes flipped
stutter to a grinding halt
a smile curls at the corner of your lip
eyes , the way they won't look away
as if he sizes you up for a feast
you glance at the ground
flip hair from your forehead
to try gather a sense of self
but his eyes
the aura of self assurance
he raises his hand
in silent command
a demand of his masculine essence
though you are mentally screaming in protest
at this indignation
there is something
about his hand
the way he dares
his eyes stare
take it and let him pull
you head long into
a stained memory
that even now makes you blush
flushed and wonder how
with just a look
he was able to
fly through your defenses
and take you
to places you haven't been before
or since.
HoneyAdored
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Trixareforkids
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Yes! Please sir, I want some more...
I would really like to see what you'd write with the theme of equality in mind.
HoneyAdored
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