dansouthwest
Really Experienced
- Joined
- Aug 26, 2016
- Posts
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Good afternoon,
I published my first story a couple of days ago.
Speaking to a few authors on the "Author's hangout" thread made me realise ideally I should get some constructive criticism and feedbacks before publishing further stories.
Please find below the link for my story:
https://www.literotica.com/s/london-adventures-01
I already know I need to work on my punctuation and get the help of an editor, but I welcome any other feedbacks and comments.
Thanks
Dan
I published my first story a couple of days ago.
Speaking to a few authors on the "Author's hangout" thread made me realise ideally I should get some constructive criticism and feedbacks before publishing further stories.
Please find below the link for my story:
https://www.literotica.com/s/london-adventures-01
I already know I need to work on my punctuation and get the help of an editor, but I welcome any other feedbacks and comments.
Thanks
Dan