wishfulthinking
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Hi again, part three of Innocent Pawn is up today. Thankyou for the wonderful feedback for part 2!
This is the part where I say it is great, please vote, blah blah. But it sucks. Just how lame it is I can't tell, because when I read through it, I'm looking for mistakes and not getting a feel for the story. So I'll wait until I get a few "you suck" comments before giving it a rewrite! I'll just skim over the list of volunteer editors in the mean time.
Edit: I'm adding this little extra bit to say, out of my 3 stories, this one is doing the best, even though I like it the least. Go figure.
This is the part where I say it is great, please vote, blah blah. But it sucks. Just how lame it is I can't tell, because when I read through it, I'm looking for mistakes and not getting a feel for the story. So I'll wait until I get a few "you suck" comments before giving it a rewrite! I'll just skim over the list of volunteer editors in the mean time.
Edit: I'm adding this little extra bit to say, out of my 3 stories, this one is doing the best, even though I like it the least. Go figure.
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