Author's first submission, mild D/s looking for an editor

Resolved: Author's first submission, mild D/s looking for an editor

Please note - This has been resolved, I have found what I needed and am no longer looking for an editor. Thank you.

I've written a couple works for my partners, but I'm working on my first submission.

It's a short one about 1400 words, mild D/s, light bondage and denial, consensual. A couple's afternoon quickie in a hotel room. It's done and just looking for a little once-over and feedback. As well as category and tagging suggestions, please PM me if interested.

Opinion feedback

Hello Ms mariner, I am new to this site and would be more than happy to read your story and to give an opinion. I am English, broad minded and unshockable. I assure you a prompt reply and look forward to hearing from you asap. Kind regards Kenny. X