HushHushCrush
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- Dec 23, 2015
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Hello, board,
I'm looking for early readers for a new story. It's a standalone straight love story with a lot of blowjobs, a little fucking, and some mild dom/sub play. It's also an older man/younger woman setup. If you want to glance at my other two posted stories, https://www.literotica.com/s/clay-cats and https://www.literotica.com/s/danis-fandom, it should give you a clue whether you'll enjoy reading my writing or not (though this new one is a bigger story with oodles more sex!) This draft should be around 15,000 words, and I’ll probably have a version ready to send out on Monday the 11th or so.
I'll mainly be looking for feedback on whether the characters and the plot are strong enough, at this point, but I'd be grateful for any feedback. Please PM me or post here if you're interested.
Thanks!
HHC
I'm looking for early readers for a new story. It's a standalone straight love story with a lot of blowjobs, a little fucking, and some mild dom/sub play. It's also an older man/younger woman setup. If you want to glance at my other two posted stories, https://www.literotica.com/s/clay-cats and https://www.literotica.com/s/danis-fandom, it should give you a clue whether you'll enjoy reading my writing or not (though this new one is a bigger story with oodles more sex!) This draft should be around 15,000 words, and I’ll probably have a version ready to send out on Monday the 11th or so.
I'll mainly be looking for feedback on whether the characters and the plot are strong enough, at this point, but I'd be grateful for any feedback. Please PM me or post here if you're interested.
Thanks!
HHC
Voracious reader.
