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thiscouldbtricky said:

My submission posted! The votes aren't looking so hot so far so I would greatly appreciate it if you all checked it out. Vote, comment, all that. Go easy on me, it's been a long time since I really wrote anything, but constructive criticism would be awesome!
Thanks in advance!

http://www.literotica.com/s/getting-over-it-ch-01-1

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Pervy_Sage said:

Going to check it out now. And your av is damn pretty!

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thiscouldbtricky said:

Thank you

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Pervy_Sage said:

Ok. I read it. The ending made me laugh out loud! That's good stuff.

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jiimmmy said:

I have no criticism of your story. I just cant wait to read the rest! I think maybe you gave a lot of insight to the things a girl thinks to herself.

Usually after a first date, I mull over all of the stupid things I said and whether she got my jokes or thinks Im an idiot.

So it was nice to see a little of what a girl might think in that situation.

I think you did great and Im sure you will continue to do so.

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Azuldrgon said:

*hugs* before I go on my trip.

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lidien said:

Good morning lovely one your eyes are breath taking

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benwithjamin said:

"Abruptly, I do feel wetness in my lap and it's not the good kind. In my reverie, I spilled my glass of water"... I laughed out loud, been there done that far too many times

Great first chapter though.

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lidien said:

How is your day thus far beauty?

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thiscouldbtricky said:

I'm in a mood tonight

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