amylin456
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My very first tr.. Any and all feedback appreciated..
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=463456
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=463456
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I enjoyed it, ,Id enjoy a BJ/oral love from you ,all the time! mmmm
It's a fun little piece. Write it again in the first person - and don't get carried away!
I enjoyed it, ,Id enjoy a BJ/oral love from you ,all the time! mmmm
It's a fun little piece. Write it again in the first person - and don't get carried away!
My very first tr.. Any and all feedback appreciated..
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=463456
I applaud your courage in submitting the story. There is some value in the comments about "polishing: it up a bit. More important I was, and still am very aroused by you. Would love to see more, and offer any assistance.
The original thread ended in 2010, I'm not sure this will ever be seen by the author. Seven year itch?
It was quite old story. actually a combination effort with someone else. did not really think it was that good. I would like to try more...
Amy