SyleusSnow
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- Jan 13, 2017
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I've never asked for feedback here before, but I'm not sure about my latest story. It's "interracial," but unconventional in that it involves a black Swiss woman and a white American guy who have many differences, race being the least important.
Proper Charlotte
I'd greatly appreciate feedback on the content, style and "hotness" of the story, as well as any inaccuracies about Swiss culture.
Proper Charlotte
I'd greatly appreciate feedback on the content, style and "hotness" of the story, as well as any inaccuracies about Swiss culture.