rekhaiyer22
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https://www.literotica.com/s/the-missionary-position-pt-01
I wrote a story for the first time. I know that it is a bit raw, unpolished and not up to the standards set by more experienced writers. So please do take a look and tell me what the pros and cons are. Not interested in constructive criticism. Let it rip and please tell me how things could be done differently or my writing can be improved.
I wrote a story for the first time. I know that it is a bit raw, unpolished and not up to the standards set by more experienced writers. So please do take a look and tell me what the pros and cons are. Not interested in constructive criticism. Let it rip and please tell me how things could be done differently or my writing can be improved.
