"Daddy?" I Whispered - LITEROTICAS #1 Story Stolen!!!!

scouries said:

Just checked and this thread seems to be provoking very little attention from the readers
But I've been leaving all sorts of comments, votes, views and favorites on my own stories!

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Edited for honesty.

Still pathetic.

Hypoxia said:

Still pathetic.

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After all these years.

It's interesting that he a Freddie reappeared at the same time, though.

sr71plt said:

After all these years.

It's interesting that he a Freddie reappeared at the same time, though.

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Not the first time either, which I pointed out in another thread.

I doubt they're the same person, but maybe they do 'know' each other off lit.

Some Comments:

You Never Fail to Please
Scouries:
When I see your name on a story I'm attracted like a moth to the flame and you never disappoint me. By all means this story needs to be expanded. Hell it could probably go 5 or 6 chapters without wearing thin, but then you're so could at it you would have no problem carrying it off. Thank You


Great Hot & Sexy Story
Daddy you are so horny with 3 hot and horny mummys with darling babies all sired by you. I hope that Sam's husband is still getting some pussy from the girls, or some pure mothers milk. As he likes to dress up as a female it is about time he had his pussy serviced again. Strapon may be?

Loved it!!!
Absolutely one of the BEST stories i have read in a LONG time....i came multiple times!

Awesome
Scouries writes the best stories, and this series was the best of the best, IMO. Keep at it!

You are the best
Greetings from India. Have been an avid fan of yours. I've tried to refrain from admitting this and have read many other authors on this site as well as others, but, you happen to the best... Best of luck

Damn you and your story telling.
I am so into reading your stories one after another that I'm not getting things done that I should be attending to. You sure know how to hold an audience especially me. I have some suggestions for another story for you but will have to do that later because it's almost 3:30AM and I need to get some sleep. Thank You

Laughed Out Loud!
I was so into the story, that when I got to the line where Naomi shouts "Wake up, Mommie's not happy!", I laughed out loud! Great story, interesting twists with cross-dressing son-in-law, and total dominance by dad. Does Daddy take son-in-law's virgin ass, or would that be too much?

Some Comments:

1 a great erotic story despite the fact that i discovered i was an infertile man myself 23 years ago

2 How can u put this in a valentine contest???
there isn't loving at all of that wife. For a cuckold story is fine and all but putting this in a valentines contest??? You must be kidding!!!!

And I do pity Paul, because it looks like his wife is a fucking cake eater who is eventually gonna cuckold him with 4 children, while taking a lover by her side. Again, what is so loving about this tale? If this was only once I could pass it, but she will make him take care of four bastards and keep a lover, what is that SOOO loving?

I repeat again, for those who love cheating wives is a good tale, but making it into romance? If this what people see as love then man, what has society grown into?

3 yet another outstanding read
I've missed your stories but you've come back strong with this one. An OUTSTANDING story and an enjoyable read. Keep up the good work and don't make us wait so long before the next one.

4 GREAT
Once again, you have outdone yourself. Not only an enjoyable story but one most of us can see happening in real life. A young, beautiful, impressionable girl swept off her feet by a silver tounged devil! You have merged love, lust, naiveté and cheating into a wonderfully entertaining and belivable story. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to at least 4 more as he impregnates her again and again!

5 What are you really?
It appears that your are just one large pile of human shit.

6 What sort of bullshit is this?
A Valentines story about a whore/slut/bitch and you the writer, the so called hero of the story, you sir are an arsehole. Paul isn't lucky, if anyone thinks that being cucked by your wife and then forced to bring up 4 little bastards as your own? and then one day you find out your wife is not only fucking and arsehole but also fucking her brother. That is just sick. If this is your best work then I hate to even think about what your worst would be. This the first and last story of yours I will read. I really hope you don't even get close to winning the contest.

7 Truth is indeed stranger than fiction
Wait until the tabloids get wind of this. Many loving wives will be coming forth confessing to having extramarital affairs (and babies) with Literotica's most famous author. I predict this is only the tip of the iceberg. I gave you 5 stars, scouries, for being so brutally honest and doing it in such an erotically entertaining way.

8 Kind of a different twist for you...
But, like all of your stories, I found it very entertaining. I always appreciate what you do. You've been on my "Favorites List" for a long time, Jim. Keep doing what you do.

9 awwwwwwwww
i have always loved your stories and this one is great!!!! i know that if i ever met you in person my mind would be blown!!! she is one lucky girl and you are undoubtedly one hell of a lucky guy and fairly brilliant...great great great story!
This is the best story I have read till now. It was very lovely. I have always appreciated you and this story of yours is even better than the ones I have read till now. You narrated it really well and drew me into the story. You are just amazing.

10 So hot
Wish you would give Me your baby too

11 no banks
Paul will never have DNA checks done. He would have to acknowledge that his sperm couldn't get to Angelique's eggs. He might have to admit to himself his own infertility. He is happy, he is not a cuckold. He is a real husband and a good father. Jim just comes around every few months and gives her another baby, and aquires material for another chapter in the story of Angie in the Lingerie Shop. Angie becomes a good mother and loving wife who never steps out of her family for loving except when Scouries comes to town for another baby. So, she finally tells Johnny of her love for him. On Valentines night she seduces him wearing the black set Jim left her. Of course she's already pregnant. There is no murder here. Unlike most unfaithful wives or husbands, she deeply loves all three of her men. Her marriage could have gone stale and ended. She was too young and full of dreams to have an infertile husband, so, scouries probably saved their relationship.

scouries said:

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Why does she have two vaginas?

Son, I am glad you got decent scores out of the LW troglodytes, and I thought about clicking on one of these stories, but your ego's so thick and veiny it is distracting. Question: how does one ever grow and improve as a writer if they feel they have nothing left to learn?

MayorReynolds said:

Son, I am glad you got decent scores out of the LW troglodytes, and I thought about clicking on one of these stories, but your ego's so thick and veiny it is distracting. Question: how does one ever grow and improve as a writer if they feel they have nothing left to learn?

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The book on Scouries is that he created those scores himself. If you check out the named accounts of those leaving comments on his stories (and presumably votes as well), you'll find the preponderance of them are hollow accounts that only favorite Scouries and write nothing themselves. We call it the Scouries Technique.

MayorReynolds said:

Why does she have two vaginas?

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Like the sign says it's a bufet.

SunnyJohansen said:

Incest? Taboo? How about ILLEGAL?
That girl is WAY too young!

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Probably a MetArt pic.

Gotta love performance art. He's not Mike Yates great, but he's consistent.

jomar said:

Probably a MetArt pic.

Gotta love performance art. He's not Mike Yates great, but he's consistent.

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It's all about smoke, mirrors, and outlandish claims. Not to mention stolen artwork.

If ya really want to have a discussion, go read this story and explain why it is rated as it is. I dare ya.

TxRad said:

It's all about smoke, mirrors, and outlandish claims. Not to mention stolen artwork.

If ya really want to have a discussion, go read this story and explain why it is rated as it is. I dare ya.

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Ha, got better things to do!

Promoting your stories can pay off! Even in AHland...

lovecraft68 said:

In the story? Or are you talking about the picture he keeps showing? I couldn't get past the beginning of the story, but as for the pic, I would have to assume she's 18 or whoever took it is in deep shit.

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I'd have to assume she's 'of legal age of consent (18 years old)' and she's one of those rather worrying trend of porn sites to use women that look 'younger than their years.'

What I do find hilariously funny is that for a thread all about stealing someone else's work, does the author not think to his own hypocrisy?

I'm sure all these photographs are his own work I presume?

Some Comments:

1 Amazing!
It was a beautiful story, well written to the point to make the reader,(me) hot and bothered (lol) besides touched by the tenderness and sweetness of new love. Keep writing like that, you engaged the reader and make them happy! ( I'm happy)

2 Another great story
I wanted to thank you for all of the work you put into your stories. I have read most all of them and can't wait for more. Keep up the great work.

3 Great
I loved the development of the characters. I liked it didn't go right for the sex angle. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

4 Another male chauvinist bastard
I found myself getting an ulcer reading about the arrogant , pompous,manager and owner of the gym. I know this site is fantasy, but when you let horny teenagers write about arrogant males who would be out of business in a real world I stop reading. Better luck in your next story.

5 Outstanding!
Superb fiction. Thank you, scouries. This story is special because it gets better and better with every sentence. It starts small and finishes large. That's a winner every time.

6 Nice Story and brilliant ending - all happy...
Erotic, funny and pure 'scouries' - please do keep them coming (teehee!) and... yes, I remember my competitive swim days when healthy youths merged into many strokes and not all of them in the pool either! Swim or loose it...

7 Swimeric
Great, just great; love the humor.

8 Excellent writing again
Your humour and writing style makes your stories so readable. I am plucking up courage to submit my efforts and finding your submissions today are proving an inspiration.

9 Water Doesn't Put Their Fire Out!!!
Every time I read this story, it becomes more and more sexy and fun! You can't help but find yourself reading it with a smile on your entire face! The next time I go to a gym, I think I will ask for the "Gold Triple X Membership" just to see if the receptionist recognises the reference to this story and "Blushes!"

10 Sexy with humor.
I laughed out loud with this story! When he pulled down his pants for their race, I died laughing. The smartass comments on both sides, along with the chemistry were so entertaining. And I love seductions on the massage table. I didn't want the story to end. WRITE SOME MORE!!!

Quote B+W Writer What I do find hilariously funny is that for a thread all about stealing someone else's work, does the author not think to his own hypocrisy? I'm sure all these photographs are his own work I presume?



QUOTE LAUREL No, it is not (here she’s referring to it not being against LITEROTICA rules). People hotlink images all the time, including myself.

But most have the common sense not to post stolen pictures with the copyright clearly posted at the bottom. Since your stories obviously do not have a copyright, by your own admission, they are fair game to steal so you really have no bitch about your story being stolen.

Kind of ironic but then again, it never was about your story being lifted, it was all about you and your ego as usual. So dad.

I must admit to liking to have my ego stroked. I am quite the fan of it. But stroking it myself feels like trying to masturbate if I had t-rex arms. Sounds like a good idea initially, but you really aren't getting anywhere. I will admit to shameless self promotion. I have done exactly that with a few of my posts.

I have never seen a more blatant display of stroking one's own ego and shameless self promotion than this thread.

I felt bad for you when I read the OP. At around your third post on this thread, I didn't give a shit any more.

Jay321 said:

I must admit to liking to have my ego stroked. I am quite the fan of it. But stroking it myself feels like trying to masturbate if I had t-rex arms. Sounds like a good idea initially, but you really aren't getting anywhere. I will admit to shameless self promotion. I have done exactly that with a few of my posts.

I have never seen a more blatant display of stroking one's own ego and shameless self promotion than this thread.

I felt bad for you when I read the OP. At around your third post on this thread, I didn't give a shit any more.

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That's how we all feel.

One question?

It took you till the 3rd post?

People are scared of me! I'm a division manager in charge of 29 people! I drive a Dodge Stratus!

Black_and_White_Writer said:

It took you till the 3rd post?

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That shameless self promotion thing that I said I do, I thought that he may be doing a measure of that where it isn't too damn far. I gave him benefit of the doubt.

Post 2 wiped away 75% of the doubt, post 3 eradicated it.

oh great! 3 more ALTS from texas - jay, the mayor and b+w! Talking to each other . Three more off to join their puppet master on the ignore list...



Some Comments:

1 What a great story .
I honestly can't remember the last time I enjoyed a story as much as this one . Thanks

2 Classic Scouries
I never stop being aroused by a "Scouries Tail"

3 This sucks . . .
. . . and not in a good way. Next to BFW you are the worst wannabe writer on this site.

4 HOT HOT HOT
It started warming up when she licked the ice cream off her nipple with daddy watching and then really got steamy. Thanks for a great story, Rebecca.

5 Don't give up your day job
What are you in real life, anyway, a septic tank cleaner? I wish somebody would shovel this shit story away.

6 Great Story
A really great story, I lived in Hawaii for 6 years and have enjoyed most of the places you've described. The characters were well developed, and the story was as lush as the setting. As for your critics, every voice needs a forum, but don't let it stop you from your excellent writings. Thanks for the story from one who can't write, but loves to read. GOOD LUCK in the contest..

7 It kept me reading
I normally don't read long ass stories but this one kept me right there waiting for more and I can't wait for Craig to get there and take his sister!!!!!!!!!!

8 Hey Poobah
Why don't you try children's books? Your writing ability reminds me of a five or six-year-old. Perhaps you would be popular with the kindergarten crowd.

9 Very believable story
All this time I thought you were just a pompous ass (lol). I had no idea you can write (lol).

This was one of the best stories I have read on here.

Wonderful background. Nicely detailed. Excellent dialogue. Good, suspenseful build up to the sex scene. Very believable story. I had a most enjoyable read.
Good luck in the contest. I hope you win.

10 memories . . .
I dont get wet very often from reading something. I am a grandmother. but this did it. thank you, Judy

11 Standards?
Are there no standards of any sort on this site? This is way beyond bad, in fact I can't think of an apt word to describe this piece of idiotic writing.

12 absolutely wonderful!!!
this story is the best erotica I have read in many a year, and I thank you. I hope you will write more stories like this. anyome who does not know how pornography differs from erotica simply has to read this story and it will be clear. These are real people and not machines. They have real feelings, real needs, real misgivings, real delights. I love the humanity and their enjoyment in sensuality. I loved the mutuality of pleasure. This is first rate writing and it is an absolutely wonderful story.

13 WTF???
Writer, if this story works for you, please commit suicide ASAP, and take yourself out of our gene pool. My God, this was pathetic. I couldn't even force myself to finish it.

14 fantastic
Fantastic as usual, I don't know where you get your inspiration, but everything you write is totally erotic and loving. I can't understand the comments from others, such as "could not force myself to finish". You sir are trully gifted.

Sorry scouries but I don't have any alts and no one is on your ignore list. Your ego doesn't allow for that to happen. those are actual people talking about your bullshit out of control ego stroking.