just4friends
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indeed...
very HARD not to look....
I hope you didn't burn!
very HARD not to look....
I hope you didn't burn!
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I hope you didn't burn!
This was a couple of days later:
Pamela after a couple of days in the sun
After that first day I trimmed my vulva quite radically - you can see quite clearly that my labia tanned without burning as well!
Pamela
Part 1: I meet Marco
I had met Marco when I visited a local restaurant run by his parents. Marco was doing his family duty as a waiter, and towards the end of the meal he very shyly passed me a note asking if I would like to go out with him. I think he might have been spurred on by listening in on my conversation, much of which had been about boyfriends and the difficulty of finding a nice one. He was about the same age as me, very polite and very presentable, but nonetheless I left it for two or three days before I telephoned him and accepted his invitation.
This was a couple of days later:
Pamela after a couple of days in the sun
After that first day I trimmed my vulva quite radically - you can see quite clearly that my labia tanned without burning as well!
Pamela
This is what they wrote:After being away for a while, I have reviewed some of my earlier posts and spotted some that were never completed. On the basis that it is never too late, here follows the complete version of the Marco story. Marco was, for me, a rather unusual boyfriend, in that his penis never penetrated my vagina despite my sometimes very strong uges to feel it inside me. Before Marco it had always seemed to be me who was holding off over-eager boys, rather than the other way round.
I had met Marco when I visited a local restaurant run by his parents. Marco was doing his family duty as a waiter, and towards the end of the meal he very shyly passed me a note asking if I would like to go out with him. I think might have been spurred on by listening in on my conversation, much of which had been about boyfriends and the difficulty of finding a nice one. He was about the same age as me, very polite and very presentable, but nonetheless I left it for two or three days before I telephoned him and accepted his invitation.
I have received a charming PM from a Lit member, who I believe would prefer to remain anonymous!
He is clearly fascinated by what the view would be like if I didn't shave my pubic hair at all, and I believe he is eagerly awaiting a post on the board as an update.
I will explain later how these photos came about - they were taken in the photo club studio.
Pamela sporting a full growth of pubic hair - part of a long running research project jointly with four teenage photographers - 1
Pamela sporting a full growth of pubic hair - part of a long running research project jointly with four teenage photographers - 1
Pamela sporting a full growth of pubic hair - part of a long running research project jointly with four teenage photographers - 2
Pamela
This is what they wrote:
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Aren't they absolute darlings??
Why not write to them and tell them if you agree?
Pamela
I used to work for a large consulting company that had a style guide and group of editors who checked all reports before they went out. The company wanted to be able to patch sections of reports together that had been written by different authors and have it look like everything had been written by the same person. The result was a wonderful level of conformity in our reports.
Conformity is not all that hard to achieve. The hard parts are coming up with something interesting to write in the first place, and having a way with words to create exciting visual imagery in the readers' minds. And you do those things very well. Nice job.
I have received a charming PM from a Lit member, who I believe would prefer to remain anonymous!
He is clearly fascinated by what the view would be like if I didn't shave my pubic hair at all, and I believe he is eagerly awaiting a post on the board as an update.
I will explain later how these photos came about - they were taken in the photo club studio.
Pamela sporting a full growth of pubic hair - part of a long running research project jointly with four teenage photographers - 1
Pamela sporting a full growth of pubic hair - part of a long running research project jointly with four teenage photographers - 1
Pamela sporting a full growth of pubic hair - part of a long running research project jointly with four teenage photographers - 2
Pamela
Dear Rose
Thank you for your quick response. I think I can best show what I mean with a photo:
On open view for the first time: Pamela puts on her most intimate show for the club photographers
If I were just to lie down on the floor, I would not be able to display my anus as explicity as I am doing in this photo. I practised long and hard to be able to splay myself as wide open as this, long and hard enough to be confident that I would be able to show the photographers exactly what I intended. Although the pose in essentially contrived I think the overall effect looks fairly natural.
This is just one example, but I hope it gives you idea of what I meant.
Pamela
It's always exciting to see something that is normally kept hidden in polite society; a tanline adjacent to some soft pale skin, a tuft of pubic hair, they all catch the eye. It's hard not to look.