Here ya go PuckIt. PLenty of "Blam* s here. A humongously rough draft... Hopefully enough violence to tickle Noir as well. And dick's, altho they soon go the way of all flesh when it meets a 1911 round.
Originally Posted by PuckIt
Oh, come on! You know you want to have the heroine say it every time she pulls the trigger.
"He loves me." *Blam* "He loves me not." *Blam* With her eyes and the muzzle of the gun flickering around, she slips the tip of her tantō through the bindings on her lovers wrists. "You better fucking love me, bitch."
"Mmph." He peels the tape off his mouth as the pair move towards the door of the abandoned warehouse. "I can honestly say you've never been hotter, Chloe."
Dozer smiles, heís starting to move towards me and Pops training kicks in. Iím not going to be a victim. Iím not. The 1911 comes out from behind my butt, sweeps up, both hands, Iím not controlling my breathing, Iím holding my breath though as I aim with my extended arms and my body and the gun comes up and the front sight centers on Dozerís dick and I pull back on the trigger, fast, jerking the 1911. It doesnít matter, Iím aiming low.
ďBlamĒ and half his dick vanishes in a spray of blood.
ďBlamĒ and thereís a blossom of red in the center of his stomach.
ďBlamĒ and thereís another in his chest and heís stumbling backwards against Pepe whoís standing there frozen and my 1911 is riding up with every shot but it doesnít matter coz I started low the way Pops taught me.
ďBlamĒ and the bullet hits him dead between the eyes, eyes that are suddenly empty of life as he falls backwards through the doorway, disappearing into the night, leaving Pepe. A very surprised looking Pepe.
I move, the gun moving with me, aiming with my body and my arms. The sight. Lower center of bodymass and Iím right on target as I pull back on the trigger without thought. Just sheer blind terror. ďBlamĒ and Pepe looks down at the red hole in the center of his stomach but now Iím looking at his dick and I remember what he said and itís still hard and threatening, pointing at me like itís a fucking weapon.
ďBlam.Ē Well, that disarmed his dick, itís not a fucking weapon anymore and itís not going anywhere near me now either. No sewing that fucker back on. Pepe screams. Screams and takes a staggering step towards me.
ďBlam.Ē My 1911 rides up as I shoot again. A second blossom of red in the center of his stomach and heís standing there with both hands holding himself and heís looking at me and when I pull the trigger again it clicks on empty and Iíve used all seven rounds and Pepe sees that and takes a step towards me.
Thereís the second mag that Iíd stuck in my pocket and Pops taught me that fast reload and he drilled it into me again and again and I havenít forgotten. Muscle memory. I drop the empty mag and reload and as I jack a round in, Pepe screams, ďGonna kill you, bitchĒ and takes another step towards me and oh shit, heís reaching for me with blood stained hands and I donít want him anywhere near me and Iím screaming and bringing the gun up and his hands go for my throat as I push the barrel against his chest and pull the trigger again and again as fast as I can.
ďBlam ÖBlam Ö. Blam Ö Blam,Ē the 1911 is pressed against his body with every shot and every shot hits him and pushes him back as he reaches for me, blossoms of red flowering again and again until he crashes to the floor at my feet and ďBlam Ö Blam Ö BlamĒ Iím still shooting down into him coz heís moving, he keeps moving as the bullets hit him and Iím not stopping until he stops moving but he wonít stop, heís jerking around on the floor and I shoot until thereís a click and no blam.
I keep pulling the trigger though. Iím still aiming at him where heís lying on the floor at my feet and Iím pulling the trigger and itís clicking and clicking and Iím screaming and screaming when thereís a flurry of shots outside and a cop comes through the door with his gun in his hand and puts another couple in to Pepe, bouncing him around on the floor some more and now I drop my gun and just scream and scream and scream and thereís a siren outside thatís screaming even more loudly than I am...