Daughter Apprenticed in the Tailor Shop

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One I think I'd rather read than write (do you ever get that feeling sometimes when you have an idea?)

two slightly different versions, both incest...

in my original flash, I imagined that the aging tailor has not got much trade, but when an eighteen year old gal whose dead Mom was a seamstress asks to apprentice, he is pleased. Though he warns her that if he is busy, or not in the shop, she might have to measure inseams...

gradually, he notices business picking up- guys bringing pants in for tiny repairs like tightening buttons or replacing zippers that still work. Then one day, he comes back from lunch and discovers her blowing a customer...

so not sure if the customer then is her Dad, or if the tailor calls her Dad to come punish her, leading to sex with Dad, or of dad comes in on his own & she blows him...

in the alternate version, the gal is the tailor's daughter...
 
Is this a period piece? Do they still do that now-a-days? I thought only the unionized trades did the apprentice thing?
 
*Sigh* I feel like I'm the only one who doesn't get off on incest. I actually like the tailor's apprentice setup for a one time romp rather than a slutty parade of bjs. And it seems like such a waste of a good back story for incest. I would send in a customer with a big schlong tucked down his pants leg and let her get a handful when she measures him, then proceed to a long slow banging in the fitting room.

If it must be incest, make the tailor the father and have her practice on him, and he can show her how the clothes need to fit, placing her hands on his body, feeling the gap down his trousers and in the crutch.
 
*Sigh* I feel like I'm the only one who doesn't get off on incest. I actually like the tailor's apprentice setup for a one time romp rather than a slutty parade of bjs. And it seems like such a waste of a good back story for incest. I would send in a customer with a big schlong tucked down his pants leg and let her get a handful when she measures him, then proceed to a long slow banging in the fitting room.

If it must be incest, make the tailor the father and have her practice on him, and he can show her how the clothes need to fit, placing her hands on his body, feeling the gap down his trousers and in the crutch.

I write incest, so *that* doesn't bother me with this bunny. What *does* rile me are weak plot devices for instigating incest or other sexual activity. I know those devices are a mainstay of erotica -- and may be a factor in erotic 'literature' remaining a disreputable genre -- but a device that may suffice for triggering sex between strangers or even friends is IMHO less credible for triggering incest.

The bunny could hop further without Dad.
 
*Sigh* I feel like I'm the only one who doesn't get off on incest. I actually like the tailor's apprentice setup for a one time romp rather than a slutty parade of bjs. And it seems like such a waste of a good back story for incest. I would send in a customer with a big schlong tucked down his pants leg and let her get a handful when she measures him, then proceed to a long slow banging in the fitting room.

If it must be incest, make the tailor the father and have her practice on him, and he can show her how the clothes need to fit, placing her hands on his body, feeling the gap down his trousers and in the crutch.

Yeah that sounds better. Though would add maybe if the guy has that intention abit way through the story, but intoduce it that the girl starts the flirting and starts to wear low cut tops (for him cuz she thinks hes cute and he comes in lots) for when shes down measureing he's pants. Then he flirts back with how you discribed it and then thats how the bj theme comes in, something like she cant measure because hes schlongs making it difficult and he knows of a idea how to fix the problem......but you get the jist of it from there.
 
Is this a period piece? Do they still do that now-a-days? I thought only the unionized trades did the apprentice thing?

in this jurisdiction, all sorts of licensed trades without unions have apprenticeships...hairdressers, for example.
 
*Sigh* I feel like I'm the only one who doesn't get off on incest. I actually like the tailor's apprentice setup for a one time romp rather than a slutty parade of bjs. And it seems like such a waste of a good back story for incest. I would send in a customer with a big schlong tucked down his pants leg and let her get a handful when she measures him, then proceed to a long slow banging in the fitting room.

If it must be incest, make the tailor the father and have her practice on him, and he can show her how the clothes need to fit, placing her hands on his body, feeling the gap down his trousers and in the crutch.

a non incest version is certainly possible, but then it lacks some of the dramatic tension .
 
a non incest version is certainly possible, but then it lacks some of the dramatic tension .

Really? I totally get the reason for writing it as an incest piece because it gets double the audience on Lit. But Dramatic Tension? If you've got some time, check out Ingenious Toys The last 4000 words p3-4 are a straight guy and girl in a fitting room. It uses exhibitionism to build dramatic tension; something that can be done with just about any kink, including incest. You just need to pick a kink; first time would be fine, and it would suit the naive young apprentice theme nicely
 
I like blin18's first idea (i.e., not incest--necessarily), but I think it could also become a series of episodes with different customers...

After the first porking in the back room, she discovers she likes it and taps into her wanton Inner Slut to seduce a younger customer she finds attractive. Then she's faced with a dilemma when both Big Schlong and Young Guy come in on the same day, both expecting some nookie. Maybe ends in a spit-roast threeway... (I know, blin, you wouldn't write it this way, either, but it flows from what went before. :))

Then more customers get "sucked" into the action, and before you know it Daughter has a thriving brothel running out of the back of the shop, with various customers providing little vignettes in the story series.

Dad is amazed and pleased at how business has picked up. He returns one day early to find his daughter being plowed enthusiastically by one of the customers in the back room. After the initial indignation she confesses that this is why the shop is doing so well. Not wanting to kill the golden goose, he acquiesces in her operations, only to find himself aroused by the thought of his daughter screwing the entire male population of the town. He takes to watching, at first surreptitiously and then with daughter's consent but still unknown to the "customers". Daughter discovers it gets her hot and wet to have Dad watching and wonders how it would be to have his dick in her hot, tight, little tunnel...

Final episode: Dad fucks Daughter, and they ride off into the sunset happily continuing their incestuous liaisons while maintaining the Pay for Play business.

Additional twist: Maybe it's not just the men who come to have their garments "repaired"...
 
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I totally get the reason for writing it as an incest piece because it gets double the audience on Lit.

That's not the ultimate cause for writing it as an incest piece, blin, though that may be the proximate cause.

The real reason to write it as an incest piece is because that's what the customer asked for.
 
Really? I totally get the reason for writing it as an incest piece because it gets double the audience on Lit. But Dramatic Tension? If you've got some time, check out Ingenious Toys The last 4000 words p3-4 are a straight guy and girl in a fitting room. It uses exhibitionism to build dramatic tension; something that can be done with just about any kink, including incest. You just need to pick a kink; first time would be fine, and it would suit the naive young apprentice theme nicely

I was not suggesting that incest is the only road to dramatic tension, just perhaps an obvious & easy one.
 
I like blin18's first idea (i.e., not incest--necessarily), but I think it could also become a series of episodes with different customers...

After the first porking in the back room, she discovers she likes it and taps into her wanton Inner Slut to seduce a younger customer she finds attractive. Then she's faced with a dilemma when both Big Schlong and Young Guy come in on the same day, both expecting some nookie. Maybe ends in a spit-roast threeway... (I know, blin, you wouldn't write it this way, either, but it flows from what went before. :))

You just had to spit roast the poor sweet nymph, didn't you.

I could see a series in this, and if it finishes with incest then so be it. It could be made a bit surreal with Free BJ To First Time Customers and the girl could set up a glory hole out back. If Dad wasn't the tailor then he could come in to have his pants altered and the tailor tells him about the special offer. Even I could cop to accidental incest (but I'm yet to see a plausible scenario for accidental spit roast)
 
You just had to spit roast the poor sweet nymph, didn't you.

Actually, that was added just for you. :)
Sometimes I feel guilty...it's like dropping a fly in front of a hungry trout...

She doesn't have to be spit-roasted, but if two customers come in at the same time (and it's plausible that they would), what's a poor girl to do to keep everyone happy?
 
It could be made a bit surreal with Free BJ To First Time Customers and the girl could set up a glory hole out back.

Hmm...now I like that plot bunny, too...

As I've said before, I really like the way your mind works, blin. :)
 
Even I could cop to accidental incest (but I'm yet to see a plausible scenario for accidental spit roast)
Dave (dad) has been away for awhile - long business trip, military assignment, band tour, whatever. Danni (daughter) has transformed herself: goth tats removed, purple dye rinsed from from her re-styled hair, etc. Dave grew a bushy mustache and has a cold. He walks into the tailor shop's back room to find Danni in a short sundress (no panties) bent over blowing Charlie (customer) who is facing him. Dave does not recognize Danni (and her sweet, sweet, bubbly butt) from behind. He grunts, "WOW!" in his thick voice. Charlie says, "This is great, man!" (Maybe Danni glances over her shoulder, sees the strangely-familiar-looking guy behind her, doesn't really recognize him, doesn't really care anyway.) Either she flips her dress up and resumes the BJ, or Dave just moves into place. He unzips, locks and loads, and fires for effect. ACCIDENTAL INCEST SPIT-ROAST!

No, the tricky maneuver would be an accidental triple penetration, with or without incest, accidental or otherwise. Should I work on that?
 
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No, the tricky maneuver would be an accidental triple penetration, with or without incest, accidental or otherwise. Should I work on that?

Oh, please do!
This is more entertaining than most anything I've read this week, and I'd love to see what you come up with for an "accidental triple penetration".
 
Oh, please do!
This is more entertaining than most anything I've read this week, and I'd love to see what you come up with for an "accidental triple penetration".

OK, different cast of characters (we're not in the tailor's shop any more, Toto).

We're at a sex party with chemical additives flowing. Two guys (naked, of course -- everybody's naked here) have their crotches scissored together, jerking-off each other. A fair damsel (tanked to the gills and lubed to the max) staggers by and tries to step over them. Her feet slip on the nectar-slick floor; she does a split as she descends... right onto their long, stiff cocks. INADVERTENT DOUBLE-P! A moment later, a guy stumbles over, tangles his feet while also trying to step over the joining... and his cock slides into her mouth. ACCIDENTAL TRIPLE PENETRATION!

You may applaud now. [/me buffs nails on lapel]

Extra credit: One or more of the guys happen to be the girl's brother(s). Extra-extra credit: they're twins or triplets. Yet more credit: another (male) relative staggers over, stands behind the standing BJ recipient, and impales his ass. And yet more: the sex party is at a family reunion. Et fucking cetera.

EDIT: Wait, I forgot one. Girl is DP'd on the floor with a cock in her mouth, said cock jiggling because its owner is being butt-fucked. Girl is uncomfortable. She reaches out for supports to lift herself off the twin dicks, but the only nearby protuberances are... stiff belonging to two guys standing one either side of her. So now she's encased in a penis pentagram, all orifices and both hands. Groovy!
 
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Dave (dad) has been away for awhile - long business trip, military assignment, band tour, whatever. Danni (daughter) has transformed herself: goth tats removed, purple dye rinsed from from her re-styled hair, etc. Dave grew a bushy mustache and has a cold. He walks into the tailor shop's back room to find Danni in a short sundress (no panties) bent over blowing Charlie (customer) who is facing him. Dave does not recognize Danni (and her sweet, sweet, bubbly butt) from behind. He grunts, "WOW!" in his thick voice. Charlie says, "This is great, man!" (Maybe Danni glances over her shoulder, sees the strangely-familiar-looking guy behind her, doesn't really recognize him, doesn't really care anyway.) Either she flips her dress up and resumes the BJ, or Dave just moves into place. He unzips, locks and loads, and fires for effect. ACCIDENTAL INCEST SPIT-ROAST!

No, the tricky maneuver would be an accidental triple penetration, with or without incest, accidental or otherwise. Should I work on that?

Well then, don't *I* stand corrected. In my mind, accidental spit-roast incest should have both guys as family members, which I suppose could be achieved with the glory-hole. Unfortunately, the high-five and witty banter (fuck that bitch, hey man leave some tight in that pussy for me) that are so crucial to a successful spit-roast would be rendered all but impossible by the glory hole wall.

For the accidental incest TP, I want three generations of men (father, brother, son) ... but hey, no pressure, OK.
 
... the high-five and witty banter (fuck that bitch, hey man leave some tight in that pussy for me) that are so crucial to a successful spit-roast...

Really? Not in my experience. Usually the guys are too busy getting off themselves that they don't bother with high-fiving and witty banter--assuming anything wittier than, "Fuck!!! This bitch is tight!!" is running through their brains, which I can almost guarantee you it isn't.

You've been watching too many porn flicks, my dear...
 
OK, different cast of characters (we're not in the tailor's shop any more, Toto).

We're at a sex party with chemical additives flowing. Two guys (naked, of course -- everybody's naked here) have their crotches scissored together, jerking-off each other. A fair damsel (tanked to the gills and lubed to the max) staggers by and tries to step over them. Her feet slip on the nectar-slick floor; she does a split as she descends... right onto their long, stiff cocks. INADVERTENT DOUBLE-P! A moment later, a guy stumbles over, tangles his feet while also trying to step over the joining... and his cock slides into her mouth. ACCIDENTAL TRIPLE PENETRATION!

You may applaud now. [/me buffs nails on lapel]

Extra credit: One or more of the guys happen to be the girl's brother(s). Extra-extra credit: they're twins or triplets. Yet more credit: another (male) relative staggers over, stands behind the standing BJ recipient, and impales his ass. And yet more: the sex party is at a family reunion. Et fucking cetera.

EDIT: Wait, I forgot one. Girl is DP'd on the floor with a cock in her mouth, said cock jiggling because its owner is being butt-fucked. Girl is uncomfortable. She reaches out for supports to lift herself off the twin dicks, but the only nearby protuberances are... stiff belonging to two guys standing one either side of her. So now she's encased in a penis pentagram, all orifices and both hands. Groovy!

ABSOLUTELY OVER THE TOP!! Kudos!! Kudos!!
Of course none of that is plausible, but hey! We're God-Like-Authors, right?
 
Really? Not in my experience.

Well shit, you just got yourself uninvited from my next spit roast party. Us sluts live for the high five.

True story: I was recently invited to a quote-unquote 'Spit Roast Party'. Imagine my relief when it turned out to be a lamb over a charcoal pit.

You've been watching too many porn flicks, my dear...

LALALALALALA I CANT HEAR YOU. Wash your mouth out @BM, porn is so too real.
 
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