non-consent/reluctance editor needed

xxxwildebeest said:

Would anyone be interested in looking over my short story (~3,000 words) titled, "Taking my Love for a Spin" (non-consent/reluctance). It is the first story I've written for this site, so I would like if you could focus on plot progression, believability, and character development.

Feedback in other areas would also be greatly appreciated!

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