Seeking Editor for Pirate Fantasy

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I'm looking for an editor / beta reader for the second part to a Pirate Fantasy / Lesbian story. There's a lot of supernatural elements to the story, it relies a bit on the first part of the story (which was not under an editor or beta reader), and it's also interracial, but that kind of tag is completely irrelevant. There is violence, but it is completely unconnected to the sex in every way possible.

Here is the first part of that story to get a taste of what you'd be looking at: https://www.literotica.com/s/cursed-seas-pt-01-the-wishing-stone

If you are interested, please shoot me a private message. I am more than confident about my grammar or spelling, but am looking for a second voice on story events, timing, and the general feel of the story.
 
Any takers? I'd seriously appreciate a beta reader for this story.
 
Sure, I'll take a look at it over the weekend. What feedback do you want?
 
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