Free Thoughts~on One word...

whip me frenzied feathery froth
light and peaked on top
oh you bring me
up so bright
with all this air puffing
my pockets full
of nothing
but your
will to stand me
high
 
cherries_on_snow said:
whip me frenzied feathery froth
light and peaked on top
oh you bring me
up so bright
with all this air puffing
my pockets full
of nothing
but your
will to stand me
high


a feather's whip
slaps silent hope
across bare flesh
talent fingers row
over a body's sea
anchored to tendrils
sailing a-breast
in whispered song
molding skin curls
around another
asking for another
from the feather
 
My Erotic Trail said:
a feather's whip
slaps silent hope
across bare flesh
talent fingers row
over a body's sea
anchored to tendrils
sailing a-breast
in whispered song
molding skin curls
around another
asking for another
from the feather

how ya'll got wip...W ork I n P rogress...into a crack..whip ...ah...I rest my case... :cathappy:
 
I like this even more the second time I read it. And happy belated birthday, VD.
vampiredust said:
whip, eh?

consider:

Whip

You are God's forgotten son.
He would have created you
out of pebbles, mud and soil
if he hadn't drawn a curve

in wet sand and breathed
on it. So the Devil did it instead,
carving an imperfect S
from a volcano-red hide.

You can feel his voice lashing
out with every flick, asking
for forgiveness even if no one
is listening.
 
My Erotic Trail said:
a feather's whip
slaps silent hope
across bare flesh
talent fingers row
over a body's sea
anchored to tendrils
sailing a-breast
in whispered song
molding skin curls
around another
asking for another
from the feather
sexy! :devil: :cathappy:
 
I think I need a

massage

Syllables: mas-sage
Parts of speech: noun , transitive verb

Part of Speech noun
Pronunciation mE sazh
mE saj
Definition 1. a treatment of the body that involves rubbing,
kneading, and stroking to improve circulation, ease stiffness,
or provide relaxation.

Synonyms rubdown
Crossref. Syn. rub
Similar Words shiatsu , kneading , rubbing , Rolfing ,
manipulation

Related Words caress


Part of Speech transitive verb

Inflected Forms massaged, massaging, massages

Definition 1. to treat by rubbing, stroking, or kneading the body;
give a massage to.

Synonyms knead
Crossref. Syn. caress , rub
Similar Words rub , stroke , manipulate

Related Words chafe

Derived Forms massager, n.




How about you? Anyone up for this?

Happy Writing ~ ;)
 
can we shoot
for the moon.


fantasy or mirage tell me
what good is it to sit
day after day
wishing, dreaming
when all I ask, all I require
is you, in my life.

it's a go.
it's possible.
all can be done. just wait
and see.

my time for writing is here
now. I have inspiration
a dream to fight for.

~~~~~~~~~~~

so many days, down in the dumps
trash thrown out
except it was not
a build up sustained, remained
each passing week, day
I let it go. thinking
I am fine. all will be well.
my time will be later, when young flowers
have bloomed then blossomed
spread their petals and
shown the world their beauty.


interrupted ... grrr
 
Massage

Lie back and let my hands do the work.
Think of things that you can let go:
a wedding ring, divorce bills, sexuality.
Burn them with my hands, kneading

your broken back. Let me rearrange
everything in the order that's most
convenient. You're my client and nothing
is difficult to do. And I mean, nothing.

Don't look at me that way. Lower
your eyes. They're not wanted there.
Put hands away. Stay still or security
will come. Just let me knead your life

away. Breath in incense, that's it. Turn
your fears into things you can achieve.
That's what all these gurus say. Don't
pay attention. Just get up and leave.
 
RhymeFairy said:
can we shoot
for the moon.


fantasy or mirage tell me
what good is it to sit
day after day
wishing, dreaming
when all I ask, all I require
is you, in my life.

it's a go.
it's possible.
all can be done. just wait
and see.

my time for writing is here
now. I have inspiration
a dream to fight for.

~~~~~~~~~~~

so many days, down in the dumps
trash thrown out
except it was not
a build up sustained, remained
each passing week, day
I let it go. thinking
I am fine. all will be well.
my time will be later, when young flowers
have bloomed then blossomed
spread their petals and
shown the world their beauty.


interrupted ... grrr

I cannot finish this one to my dismay. The mood/time has passed.
That's ok, was more like a blog entry anyway and I am fully aware of this. Just something that was knocking around the marbles otherwise known as the brain. :rolleyes:

now onto Massage ... a more interesting subject.

~ Christian ...

Love yours. You not only caressed my tired muscles you made putty of my cabasa.

... Love your humor and hands on approach ~

:catroar: ;) :rose:
 
RhymeFairy said:
can we shoot
for the moon.


fantasy or mirage tell me
what good is it to sit
day after day
wishing, dreaming
when all I ask, all I require
is you, in my life.

it's a go.
it's possible.
all can be done. just wait
and see.

my time for writing is here
now. I have inspiration
a dream to fight for.

~~~~~~~~~~~

so many days, down in the dumps
trash thrown out
except it was not
a build up sustained, remained
each passing week, day
I let it go. thinking
I am fine. all will be well.
my time will be later, when young flowers
have bloomed then blossomed
spread their petals and
shown the world their beauty.


interrupted ... grrr



So much good stuff here--
If I only had time to read it with the attention it deserves
Still, a quick foray into Lit ---- and your world
is better then facing the daily dross having not known at all.

But I have had a chance to sneak into your thread
Early in the morning when others are asleep
by lamplight
enjoying your words
 
RhymeFairy said:
I think I need a

massage

Syllables: mas-sage
Parts of speech: noun , transitive verb

Part of Speech noun
Pronunciation mE sazh
mE saj
Definition 1. a treatment of the body that involves rubbing,
kneading, and stroking to improve circulation, ease stiffness,
or provide relaxation.

Synonyms rubdown
Crossref. Syn. rub
Similar Words shiatsu , kneading , rubbing , Rolfing ,
manipulation

Related Words caress


Part of Speech transitive verb

Inflected Forms massaged, massaging, massages

Definition 1. to treat by rubbing, stroking, or kneading the body;
give a massage to.

Synonyms knead
Crossref. Syn. caress , rub
Similar Words rub , stroke , manipulate

Related Words chafe

Derived Forms massager, n.




How about you? Anyone up for this?

Happy Writing ~ ;)

there was a message in her massage
speaking with her fingers
kneeding my muscle
 
Massage,,,

My Erotic Trail said:
there was a message in her massage
speaking with her fingers
kneeding my muscle

Massage my heart and heal the pain
that seized it every day,

allow it now to beat again,
and feel a different way.

Massage the memories that filled my mind,
of tears so freely shed,

Let them dissolve in peace and quiet,
and forever put to bed.

Massage my mind to think again,
and allow myself to feel.

To turn from lies and deception given
and now know from them whats real.

To know committment, honesty,
and massage the truth in love.

To give thanks for that and massage past,
to the Great Spirit high above.

Massage my soul and set me free,
as I now Massage you.

Through words of hope, encouragement
my message of massage for you.
 
Many Feathers said:
Massage my heart and heal the pain
that seized it every day,

allow it now to beat again,
and feel a different way.

Massage the memories that filled my mind,
of tears so freely shed,

Let them dissolve in peace and quiet,
and forever put to bed.

Massage my mind to think again,
and allow myself to feel.

To turn from lies and deception given
and now know from them whats real.

To know committment, honesty,
and massage the truth in love.

To give thanks for that and massage past,
to the Great Spirit high above.

Massage my soul and set me free,
as I now Massage you.

Through words of hope, encouragement
my message of massage for you.

I have hope
and encouragement.
True love
has signed the sheets,
massaged moments
into pure bliss. Blinking
stepped back and breathed
new life
into broken dreams.

:rose: :heart:
 
RhymeFairy said:
I have hope
and encouragement.
True love
has signed the sheets,
massaged moments
into pure bliss. Blinking
stepped back and breathed
new life
into broken dreams.

:rose: :heart:

massaging paper
with my pen
in a poetic way
 
massage

message pressed into skin
a morris code tapping
the lines along my spine
those fingers press hot spots
between pain and release
until the brain recieves
the body replies in a sigh
 
Here's one...

Would love to see some prose on this thought...and then will add mine as well when I have the time to use my magnifying glass to type it! LOL

"Letting go"
 
Many Feathers said:
Would love to see some prose on this thought...and then will add mine as well when I have the time to use my magnifying glass to type it! LOL

"Letting go"

Letting go ...

from Letting Go Quotes


You never leave someone behind, you take a part of them with you and leave a part of yourself behind.

I made the choice to finally go because I can’t stand this pain. It’s time for my last tear to fall and me to smile again. - Brandy

Being strong sometimes means being able to let go.

As you left and said your good-byes, you forgot to tell my heart how to live without you.

Good-byes make you think. They make you realize what you’ve had, what you’ve lost and what you’ve taken for granted.

How lucky I am to have known someone who was so hard to say goodbye to.

I learned to laugh, I learned to cry, but will I ever learn to say goodbye?

I’ve learned that good-byes will always hurt, pictures can never replace being there, memories forget the hard times, words can never replace feelings, and heroes often go unsung.

Saying goodbye isn’t the hard part, it’s what we leave behind that’s tough.

Why are the words goodbye, I’m sorry and I love you, so easily pronounced, but so hard to say?

Goodbye, I never wanna see you again. Goodbye, I don’t want to be your friend and there’s no need for me to stay and lose myself to you. And be abused by you. I don’t need the pain from your mind games. When you try them again, I won’t be there for them to work anymore. - Save Ferris

Sometimes you have to let go of the one you love to find out if there is really something there.

Just before I go, don’t you offer any sweet advice because where were all your shoulders when I needed them so long ago? And now with legs so weak and weary from this silly dance, with a suitcase full of memories, I pack my bags and slowly drift away. - Fuel

Sometimes you have to let go of someone to see if there’s anything there to hold on to.

Sometimes you won’t let go of love. More times love won’t let go of you.

There is a time for departure even when there is no certain place to go.

Maybe some people just aren’t meant to be in our lives forever. Maybe some people are just passing through. It’s like some people just come through our lives to bring us something: a gift, a blessing, a lesson we need to learn, and that’s why they’re here... you’ll have that gift forever. - The Gift

Don’t be dismayed at good-byes. A farewell is necessary before we can meet again and meeting again, after moments or a lifetime, is certain for those who are friends.

The loss of a friend is like that of a limb. Time may heal the anguish of the wound, but the loss cannot be repaired. - Robert Southey

Don’t want to leave, but we both know sometimes it’s better to go. Somehow I know we’ll meet again. Not sure quite where and I don’t know just when. You’re in my heart, so until then... wanna smile, wanna cry, saying good-bye. - Muppets Take Manhattan

I don’t want to wake up and realize what I was dreaming was right in front of my shut eyes. I don’t want to stop saying hellos for fear of saying good-byes.


:rose:
 
Well, not prose...

Many Feathers said:
Would love to see some prose on this thought...and then will add mine as well when I have the time to use my magnifying glass to type it! LOL

"Letting go"

but how about some lyrics..by Kris Kristofferson

Me and Bobby McGee

Busted flat in Baton Rouge, headin for the trains,
Feelin nearly faded as my jeans.
Bobby thumbed a diesel down just before it rained,
Took us all the way to New Orleans.
Took my harpoon out of my dirty red bandana
And was blowin sad while Bobby sang the blues,
With them windshield wipers slappin time and
Bobby clappin hands we finally sang up every song
That driver knew.

Freedom's just another word for nothin left to lose,
And nothin aint worth nothin but its free,
Feelin good was easy, lord, when Bobby sang the blues,
And buddy, that was good enough for me,
Good enough for me and my Bobby Mcgee.

From the coalmines of Kentucky to the California sun,
Bobby shared the secrets of my soul,
Standin right beside me through everythin I done,
And every night she kept me from the cold.
Then somewhere near Salinas, lord, I let her slip away,
She w'd trade all my tomorrows for a single yesterday,
Holdin Bobby's body close to mine.

Freedom's just another word for nothin left to lose,
And nothin left was all she left to me,
Feelin good was easy, lord, when Bobby sang the blues,
And buddy, that was good enough for me.
Good enough for me and Bobby Mcgee.
 
RhymeFairy said:
Letting go ...

from Letting Go Quotes


You never leave someone behind, you take a part of them with you and leave a part of yourself behind.

Maybe some people just aren’t meant to be in our lives forever. Maybe some people are just passing through. It’s like some people just come through our lives to bring us something: a gift, a blessing, a lesson we need to learn, and that’s why they’re here... you’ll have that gift forever. - The Gift

I don’t want to wake up and realize what I was dreaming was right in front of my shut eyes. I don’t want to stop saying hellos for fear of saying good-byes.


:rose:

touching quotes RF
 
I cannot let go
of the past.
Memories and still slides
reside in this heart.
Healing
Hatching
New visions of what can be.
So speak to me
lover. Paint my picture
upon the walls of history.
Into your spirit, where forever
we shall soar ...
 
RhymeFairy said:
I cannot let go
of the past.
Memories and still slides
reside in this heart.
Healing
Hatching
New visions of what can be.
So speak to me
lover. Paint my picture
upon the walls of history.
Into your spirit, where forever
we shall soar ...


those joyous orgasmic screams
that unfold on nights like dreams
and fingers found your moans and groans
nights you were not all alone
 
My Erotic Trail said:
those joyous orgasmic screams
that unfold on nights like dreams
and fingers found your moans and groans
nights you were not all alone



I was not alone.

Moments in pain, body
screams from brittle
pathways broken. Fever
induced haze brought on
by blood smears, droplets
caught and wiped by smooth
long fingers as lean frown lines
worry.

Soft kisses to brow
and smoothing
words of encouragement,
soothing to keep up,
rest and recuperate.

Taken in small doses
this turned
nightly demons, into helping
hands. Behexing all the wrongs
to turn right.

Left with a painless sleep
long into the night as caring
hands caressed, carrying
the hurt away ...


:rose:
 
RhymeFairy said:

I was not alone.

Moments in pain, body
screams from brittle
pathways broken. Fever
induced haze brought on
by blood smears, droplets
caught and wiped by smooth
long fingers as lean frown lines
worry.

Soft kisses to brow
and smoothing
words of encouragement,
soothing to keep up,
rest and recuperate.

Taken in small doses
this turned
nightly demons, into helping
hands. Behexing all the wrongs
to turn right.

Left with a painless sleep
long into the night as caring
hands caressed, carrying
the hurt away ...


:rose:


one of my favorite songs is...
every rose has its thorn, not sure who sings it... guns n roses (I think) not much on the band but like the song, although I generally listen to both kinds of music... country and western. (~_~)

but...
we both lie close together
a million miles apart inside...
 
Heart Canopy

Today I have built you a shrine.
As your disciple,
I am no architect;
my bricks are held together by
the blood pumping in the pain
of my veins...
I will worship you there,
tethered to your disappearance
and maybe tomorrow I’ll shatter the
bricks of your tabernacle.
But, as yesterday,
my today dwells
beneath the canopy of letting go.
 
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