LesbianChickLit
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- Jun 24, 2013
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Hello All,
I'd like a line edit on chapter six of an ongoing story of mine - 11k words, Lesbian Sex with mild BDSM. Basically, it needs a second set of eyes to check for clarity and continuity within itself throughout. (I'm terrible at catching myself when I've dropped a preposition or let a character be eaten out before her underwear is removed, etc.)
A structural/plot edit would be welcome as well - particularly from an editor familiar with lesbian sex - but that doesn't seem like a reasonable request for a sixth chapter. The narrative structure is fairly complex as well, alternating between two narrators and their first-person perspective on two timelines.
Thanks,
LesbianChickLit
I'd like a line edit on chapter six of an ongoing story of mine - 11k words, Lesbian Sex with mild BDSM. Basically, it needs a second set of eyes to check for clarity and continuity within itself throughout. (I'm terrible at catching myself when I've dropped a preposition or let a character be eaten out before her underwear is removed, etc.)
A structural/plot edit would be welcome as well - particularly from an editor familiar with lesbian sex - but that doesn't seem like a reasonable request for a sixth chapter. The narrative structure is fairly complex as well, alternating between two narrators and their first-person perspective on two timelines.
Thanks,
LesbianChickLit
