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Anything? Kk I shall share a postie when I get home!
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Part of my book for you sir 
Though at night after everyone was sleeping her older sister read to her sometimes. She would remember mainly one book from Steven King “The Howling.” Her sister said she would only read the good parts to her. It wasn’t like other books. As her sister read she closed her eyes and became that person in the story every time. For this particular book she was locked in the bathroom and the man came in to rape her and bite her. She again was sexual; she felt the words as much as she heard them. Her body alive to the thoughts and the pictures the words portrayed. She had no idea what it meant but she could feel it ever so deeply as she had felt the strangers hands on her body and she was torn without understanding. Having no idea what it meant she laid there and listened and dreamed and imagined the feeling all over again.
Though at night after everyone was sleeping her older sister read to her sometimes. She would remember mainly one book from Steven King “The Howling.” Her sister said she would only read the good parts to her. It wasn’t like other books. As her sister read she closed her eyes and became that person in the story every time. For this particular book she was locked in the bathroom and the man came in to rape her and bite her. She again was sexual; she felt the words as much as she heard them. Her body alive to the thoughts and the pictures the words portrayed. She had no idea what it meant but she could feel it ever so deeply as she had felt the strangers hands on her body and she was torn without understanding. Having no idea what it meant she laid there and listened and dreamed and imagined the feeling all over again.
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Well worded sir love this one
Methinks reorganizing the words makes for a slightly better reading.
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I think sir I like the first one better ...it reads smoother for me ...but im just weird so ! I think the breaks play better in the first one as I read it ...
I think in all honesty all I would change would be combining feeding the unknown on the same line ...reading it sounds as if there's to many breaks in that one spot ...maybe put demon up with uknown and start the next line with lurking
In ritualistic sacrifices appeasing
Sowing, seeding, replenishing
Feeding The Unknown
Demon lurking within the maize
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Annie's dolls are made of lead, but Annie doesn't mind
She likes the way they're painted and the taste they leave behind
They only speak when spoken to and never walk away
Annie's dolls are perfect, but Annie's in the way
Annie's dolls are made of lead, but Annie doesn't mind
She likes the way they're painted and the taste they leave behind
They only speak when spoken to and never walk away
Annie's dolls are perfect, but Annie's in the way
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I think sir I like the first one better ...it reads smoother for me ...but im just weird so ! I think the breaks play better in the first one as I read it ...
I think in all honesty all I would change would be combining feeding the unknown on the same line ...reading it sounds as if there's to many breaks in that one spot ...maybe put demon up with uknown and start the next line with lurking
In ritualistic sacrifices appeasing
Sowing, seeding, replenishing
Feeding The Unknown
Demon lurking within the maize
I think I'm done rewriting the darn thing for now.
Shoot me in the head if I tamper with it anymore.
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Yup and they are scratched to holy hell.
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You rub it into the DVDs and then polish it off before they are dry. It smells like wasp-spray.
Given the price of DVDs these days, it'd prolly be cheaper to buy new ones.
Just put the damn movies on Netflix!
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Not read in a long time.
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Stephen King was not happy with that movie, either.
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I know and with good reason. He eventually cames to terms with having his work butchered because in the end, his books were his books and the movies he had no hand in making did not change his books.
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