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Kojote said:
There are only about two things worse than that: Cold coffee and instant coffee... :D
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Not sure if this is worse. I split an apartment with a guy I'd gone to college with when he was in grad school and I had just finished. In the morning, before work,
he'd make his "coffee." He would heat the water. While waiting, he would take out a tall glass mug and put in: instant coffee, much milk, and much sugar. When the water was hot, he'd dump it in, stir it all up, then chug it down.

Even I, who does not drink coffee, was appalled.

I said, how can you? Is it even coffee at that point?

His explanation, as I recall, was that it cut down on time -- he got his coffee, and it was instantly cool enough to drink.

Ick.
 
Kojote said:
There's an added benefit for people with kids: Writing broadens and deepens the understanding of grammar even more than reading. So writers can all the better help their kids with homework... ;)
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This is true in other ways too, I guess. I have found that writing here has made me a better non-fiction writer. My sentences have shortened, and I use less flowery language.

I can see my next meeting now. "But Dr. Advisor, I was working this summer, honest! I was writing porn! It is an integral part of my doctoral career."

Kojote said:
There are only about two things worse than that: Cold coffee and instant coffee... :D
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Mmmm... thanks for reminding me about iced coffee! Time to make some espresso and pour it over ice.
I'm with you on the instant coffee, though.

In my defense, while I was a chronic re-heater when I worked in retail, I don't do it much anymore. The holiday hours were brutal, and somehow, I never got my breaks. I nursed my one coffee all day long. Without it, I would have smacked a fair few people.
 
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Well, since my editor is holding my finished completed chapter hostage, I will have to go back to the next installment in the "Desperate Measures" series. I put it down in June, and haven't picked it up since. If I can get through the second sex scene, I'll be pleased.

PennLady said:
Not sure if this is worse. I split an apartment with a guy I'd gone to college with when he was in grad school and I had just finished. In the morning, before work,
he'd make his "coffee." He would heat the water. While waiting, he would take out a tall glass mug and put in: instant coffee, much milk, and much sugar. When the water was hot, he'd dump it in, stir it all up, then chug it down.

Even I, who does not drink coffee, was appalled.

I said, how can you? Is it even coffee at that point?

His explanation, as I recall, was that it cut down on time -- he got his coffee, and it was instantly cool enough to drink.

Ick.
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That does sound disgusting, but it is remarkably similar to what is served in some Cuban restaurants around here, except it is served hot. They call it an "Americano."
 
PennLady said:
Not sure if this is worse. I split an apartment with a guy I'd gone to college with when he was in grad school and I had just finished. In the morning, before work,
he'd make his "coffee." He would heat the water. While waiting, he would take out a tall glass mug and put in: instant coffee, much milk, and much sugar. When the water was hot, he'd dump it in, stir it all up, then chug it down.

Even I, who does not drink coffee, was appalled.

I said, how can you? Is it even coffee at that point?

His explanation, as I recall, was that it cut down on time -- he got his coffee, and it was instantly cool enough to drink.

Ick.
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:eek:
Somehow this totally blends together with swallowing raw eggs...
 
LettersFromTatyana said:
This is true in other ways too, I guess. I have found that writing here has made me a better non-fiction writer. My sentences have shortened, and I use less flowery language.

I can see my next meeting now. "But Dr. Advisor, I was working this summer, honest! I was writing porn! It is an integral part of my doctoral career."
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To be honest I have a rather radical point of view on the 'writing porn vs. writing fiction' comparison:
What's the difference?
Swordplay or bedroom fencing. Both require some amount of detail. The differences aren't that big.
If it's done right it's art and if it's done wrong it's awkward.

Personally I think people who are really good at writing porn could even be better at writing non-porn than the authors that never tried this.

I can totally see this meeting, though...
But somehow it turns out to develop into a small porn movie... :D

LettersFromTatyana said:
Mmmm... thanks for reminding me about iced coffee! Time to make some espresso and pour it over ice.
I'm with you on the instant coffee, though.

In my defense, while I was a chronic re-heater when I worked in retail, I don't do it much anymore. The holiday hours were brutal, and somehow, I never got my breaks. I nursed my one coffee all day long. Without it, I would have smacked a fair few people.
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I can honestly say that I only tasted reheated coffee once. There was always a ready supply of fresh (or at least hot) coffee available. In the navy it was strong enough to wake up dead and even today it sometimes spends enough time on the heater to qualify as chemical weapon, but it's always hot or goes into the gutter...
But on the other hand I'm a freak. If the coffee doesn't come from an absolutely normal filter coffee machine I won’t drink it. I'm a child of the 80's here...
 
Bah, I'm leaving the coffee conversation now. Apparently none of you, except coffee reheaters, would survive at my house.

I've got my characters having lunch in a lovely Montreal bistro and now the waitress is flirting with them! Of course, she might end up being luckier than poor Marcel was....
 
annanova said:
Bah, I'm leaving the coffee conversation now. Apparently none of you, except coffee reheaters, would survive at my house.

I've got my characters having lunch in a lovely Montreal bistro and now the waitress is flirting with them! Of course, she might end up being luckier than poor Marcel was....
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My character is bent over the console of a 47' Bertram cruising twelve miles off the Florida Keys on a sunny morning, getting fucked in the ass.

*Note to self: Stop at Starbuck's before going to Annanova's house.
 
soflabbwlvr said:
My character is bent over the console of a 47' Bertram cruising twelve miles off the Florida Keys on a sunny morning, getting fucked in the ass.

*Note to self: Stop at Starbuck's before going to Annanova's house.
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And that sounds good, too.

Okay, in all fairness, if I have people coming over, I'll make a fresh pot of coffee. If it is just me, I'll make a pot (with a pinch of cinnamon in the grounds), then reheat it, by cup, as needed, although for no longer than two days. So, the pot I made this morning will last me through tomorrow.
 
I feel compelled to point out that although I do not drink coffee, I have been told that I make good coffee. Not sure what that quite means, as I've never tasted it myself and so wouldn't know if it was good or not.
 
annanova said:
If it is just me, I'll make a pot (with a pinch of cinnamon in the grounds), then reheat it, by cup, as needed, although for no longer than two days.
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Two days? Like in 2? :eek:
You're seriously much tougher than me!

PennLady said:
I feel compelled to point out that although I do not drink coffee, I have been told that I make good coffee. Not sure what that quite means, as I've never tasted it myself and so wouldn't know if it was good or not.
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That's because you don't spoil the coffee with personal taste. :D
 
Kojote said:
That's because you don't spoil the coffee with personal taste. :D
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Interesting thought. ;) When I use the 12-cup maker, I use 1 scoop per 2 cups, sometimes with just another half a scoop. I just find it funny that everyone says it's good. I mean, c'mon, it's a coffee maker -- how can it be messed up?

And now I await stories of how it can be messed up...
 
Mostly editing someone else's book today. I hope to be able to get to outlining for my next one later in the night.
 
My goal for the next millennium is to finish Ch 4. I am halfway through it (some might say half-assed through it, and right now I don't want to argue), and am caught between the Scylla of soppy syrupy sentimentality and the Charybdis of no fucking idea how to get through Sally's birthing of Francine. Serves me right for not realizing my own limitations (the story of my life).
 
Finished getting through one of the two sex scenes in my story. Yesterday and Sunday was distracting due to Football so not a lot done, plus had some phone sessions (life coaching, keep it clean guys.)

The second scene is a threesome and I am finding it hard to keep track of all the hands, and mouths and such. Also having a problem with"her" as it is 2 women, one guy. So her could be either and people could get confused.

This is tougher than I thought.
 
Got feedback on R&B5 and mayhap my heroine is not as open with her feelings, at least to the reader, as she should be. Hmmm. Oh well, nothing's posted yet so I can always go back and fix.
 
kitkat88 said:
Finished getting through one of the two sex scenes in my story. Yesterday and Sunday was distracting due to Football so not a lot done, plus had some phone sessions (life coaching, keep it clean guys.)

The second scene is a threesome and I am finding it hard to keep track of all the hands, and mouths and such. Also having a problem with"her" as it is 2 women, one guy. So her could be either and people could get confused.

This is tougher than I thought.
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I've found that in scenes involving two (or more) people of the same gender, one shouldn't be afraid of using their names. Or, there's always things like "the blonde woman," "the redhead," etc. It is tough, though, because you want people to keep track but you're trying not to be repetitive.
 
PennLady said:
I've found that in scenes involving two (or more) people of the same gender, one shouldn't be afraid of using their names. Or, there's always things like "the blonde woman," "the redhead," etc. It is tough, though, because you want people to keep track but you're trying not to be repetitive.
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God forbid I ever put Anna in a threesome with Brad and Van. They're both blond. I'm still trying to figure out how it ended up that way. Anna needs variety!

"Two days? Like in 2? You're seriously much tougher than me!" Kojote, that's just how it was when I started drinking actual coffee. I started with those horribly sweet, blended things, then visited people where that's what they do with the reheating of a pot of coffee. Although, they drink enough in a day that it comes out to one pot per day. The pot I made today will be finished tomorrow.
 
annanova said:
And that sounds good, too.

Okay, in all fairness, if I have people coming over, I'll make a fresh pot of coffee. If it is just me, I'll make a pot (with a pinch of cinnamon in the grounds), then reheat it, by cup, as needed, although for no longer than two days. So, the pot I made this morning will last me through tomorrow.
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Works for me!
 
PennLady said:
I feel compelled to point out that although I do not drink coffee, I have been told that I make good coffee. Not sure what that quite means, as I've never tasted it myself and so wouldn't know if it was good or not.
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In all seriousness, there really is no such thing as a *bad* cup of coffee.
 
kitkat88 said:
The second scene is a threesome and I am finding it hard to keep track of all the hands, and mouths and such. Also having a problem with"her" as it is 2 women, one guy. So her could be either and people could get confused.

This is tougher than I thought.
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Find somebody who does it well and copy their style. Don't copy me, I got nailed for my "dueling pronouns" lol. That's on my list of things to fix in the rewrite.

Who writes a good lezzy scene, folks? Stella Omega? She's the only Lit author I knew who writes them at all. Others?
 
SydneyBlake said:
Find somebody who does it well and copy their style. Don't copy me, I got nailed for my "dueling pronouns" lol. That's on my list of things to fix in the rewrite.

Who writes a good lezzy scene, folks? Stella Omega? She's the only Lit author I knew who writes them at all. Others?
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I haven't done a lesbian scene (yet) but I have had scenes of two female friends talking, or two sisters, or whatever, and even there it can be difficult to make sure you keep track of who's talking and not get messed up with pronouns, or repetitive with names.
 
PennLady said:
I haven't done a lesbian scene (yet) but I have had scenes of two female friends talking, or two sisters, or whatever, and even there it can be difficult to make sure you keep track of who's talking and not get messed up with pronouns, or repetitive with names.
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You do have a point. I'll have to re-read my conversations between women and see if I did anything differently. Maybe it's a "deep POV" thing for me.
 
SydneyBlake said:
Find somebody who does it well and copy their style. Don't copy me, I got nailed for my "dueling pronouns" lol. That's on my list of things to fix in the rewrite.

Who writes a good lezzy scene, folks? Stella Omega? She's the only Lit author I knew who writes them at all. Others?
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Now see my suggestion would be to do some research and get into an actual threesome. I mean you know, just to get a feel for things.
 
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