lizzystein
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- Jul 15, 2014
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Hi I posted my first story a few weeks ago. It was short but the continuation should be up as soon as it is approved. It is called Nightclub, and it is posted in the BDSM category. As I contemplate writing more, I would like feedback on the first, to know how I might improve. Here is a link
Http://www.literotica.com/s/nightclub-1
Thanks for any and all constructive criticism!
Http://www.literotica.com/s/nightclub-1
Thanks for any and all constructive criticism!