Feedback appreciated please

Hi everyone

I’ve just had the second chapter of my story published and would appreciate any feedback

The Awakening of Amy Ch. 02

Note: The story is written in a direct style (porn rather than art), so if that is not to your taste please don't waste your time reading it and then giving a low mark, try one of the many other wonderful stories available on Literotica instead.

Thanks, and looking forward to your feedback.