SFCTaleSpinner
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I’m having a little trouble getting the ball rolling on a crucial piece of dialog and I thought I might just kick it around here to see if I can get any ideas that will help.
Here’s my situation: I have a guy; the sweet, reserved kind, who really wants to screw this uber-hot girl. They’ve known each other for several years and he’s never shown any interest, but recently he’s fallen under her spell, hard.
She is notoriously easy, so right off the bat, the guy figures he’s got a reasonable chance with her if he plays his cards right. The question now being, how does he play his cards?
Some guys would be bold and just give her the ‘alpha male’ routine; always in her face, making moves on her, etc. But that’s just not in my guy’s character.
Frankly, I see him being more ‘polite’ about it. I kind of imagine him asking her whether she’d like to have sex with him. If she’s not inclined to say “yes”, then is there anything he can do that will get him laid?
I’m not suggesting he straight out says to her, “Would you sleep with me?”; he would shelter himself behind innuendo, at least at the beginning of such a conversation. That being said, I don’t think it sounds right that he’d just start of a conversation with even a veiled proposition like that. I think he’s just too tame and I think the whole conversation needs to get to sex with some subtlety. Hence my difficulties.
I’m also having problems figuring out how to manage the dialog that resolves the conversation.
See, I believe my woman would be inclined to politely reject the guy initially. But after this, I see them coming to an arrangement where the woman will screw the guy if he can get her some pot. This might seem like a bit of a silly deal, but the woman’s options for getting pot are limited in the context of my story, so she either needs to think outside the box or go without (which would suck for her as they’re having a week-long party and she wants to get the most out of it). Sex is no big deal to her, and the guy’s pretty cute, so I believe it’s completely within her character to agree to a deal like this.
My problem is how they both come to realize this is an amicable arrangement for them. She’s not exactly jonesing for the pot; it’s not like she’s just been hanging around waiting for some means of getting it. It’s more a case of the opportunity being worth seizing for her. But how do I make this opportunity come to mind?
I’d love to get some input from others on this. I don’t need a complete blueprint; just loose ideas might give me the pieces I need. Don’t be afraid to critique what I already have either. Does the pot-for-sex idea sound reasonable, or is it too far fetched?
Here’s my situation: I have a guy; the sweet, reserved kind, who really wants to screw this uber-hot girl. They’ve known each other for several years and he’s never shown any interest, but recently he’s fallen under her spell, hard.
She is notoriously easy, so right off the bat, the guy figures he’s got a reasonable chance with her if he plays his cards right. The question now being, how does he play his cards?
Some guys would be bold and just give her the ‘alpha male’ routine; always in her face, making moves on her, etc. But that’s just not in my guy’s character.
Frankly, I see him being more ‘polite’ about it. I kind of imagine him asking her whether she’d like to have sex with him. If she’s not inclined to say “yes”, then is there anything he can do that will get him laid?
I’m not suggesting he straight out says to her, “Would you sleep with me?”; he would shelter himself behind innuendo, at least at the beginning of such a conversation. That being said, I don’t think it sounds right that he’d just start of a conversation with even a veiled proposition like that. I think he’s just too tame and I think the whole conversation needs to get to sex with some subtlety. Hence my difficulties.
I’m also having problems figuring out how to manage the dialog that resolves the conversation.
See, I believe my woman would be inclined to politely reject the guy initially. But after this, I see them coming to an arrangement where the woman will screw the guy if he can get her some pot. This might seem like a bit of a silly deal, but the woman’s options for getting pot are limited in the context of my story, so she either needs to think outside the box or go without (which would suck for her as they’re having a week-long party and she wants to get the most out of it). Sex is no big deal to her, and the guy’s pretty cute, so I believe it’s completely within her character to agree to a deal like this.
My problem is how they both come to realize this is an amicable arrangement for them. She’s not exactly jonesing for the pot; it’s not like she’s just been hanging around waiting for some means of getting it. It’s more a case of the opportunity being worth seizing for her. But how do I make this opportunity come to mind?
I’d love to get some input from others on this. I don’t need a complete blueprint; just loose ideas might give me the pieces I need. Don’t be afraid to critique what I already have either. Does the pot-for-sex idea sound reasonable, or is it too far fetched?