Editor...pretty please?

Hello all,

I submitted a story a week ago and got some feedback to work on Reviewed a bit but before re-upload I would love to have someone go through it. Not only because English is not my first language but also because good advice is always welcome.

Theme is Incest / Taboo.

Thanks and happy 2018!

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Ohh :-/ thank you _Lynn_ ! How did you know!?

If you are still looking I may have a little time. How long is the story? PM me if you are interested.