TheSensualist65
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- Oct 16, 2015
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- 15
Use to do some writing on another site until they decided it was a good idea to charge a membership fee, but I digress. I have posted two stories here and would like more feedback. Tried posting to the "New Story Advertisement" sticky but nothing. So I thought I would just throw it out here.
My author name here is :TheSensualist65
Profile here: https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=2862376&page=bio
The First is "Sweet Dreams" https://www.literotica.com/s/sweet-dreams-52 in the romance category. The tale of a young mans infatuation with an older female superior at work.
The second is "The Submissive: In the Beginning" https://www.literotica.com/s/the-submissive-in-the-beginning in the BDSM category. The story of a young woman's journey as she lets go of her inhibition and gives into her submissive desires.
They are at different ends of the erotica spectrum. One thing I am concerned with is my writing of female characters. I don't want them to come across as a generic male sex toy fantasy. Any pointer on that area would be greatly appreciated.
In December I am going to start a class on "Romance Writing" at the local community college. Also I may take one on writing basics to help with my grammar and punctuation so I don't have to drive the editors crazy.
I will appreciate feed back, constructive criticism, or even unadulterated ego stroking (wink), all to help get me writing again.
My author name here is :TheSensualist65
Profile here: https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=2862376&page=bio
The First is "Sweet Dreams" https://www.literotica.com/s/sweet-dreams-52 in the romance category. The tale of a young mans infatuation with an older female superior at work.
The second is "The Submissive: In the Beginning" https://www.literotica.com/s/the-submissive-in-the-beginning in the BDSM category. The story of a young woman's journey as she lets go of her inhibition and gives into her submissive desires.
They are at different ends of the erotica spectrum. One thing I am concerned with is my writing of female characters. I don't want them to come across as a generic male sex toy fantasy. Any pointer on that area would be greatly appreciated.
In December I am going to start a class on "Romance Writing" at the local community college. Also I may take one on writing basics to help with my grammar and punctuation so I don't have to drive the editors crazy.
I will appreciate feed back, constructive criticism, or even unadulterated ego stroking (wink), all to help get me writing again.