I just published my third piece and I'd welcome any feedback on it.
https://www.literotica.com/s/4-20-p-m
I think it's worse in some ways than my previous pieces, and better in others.
https://www.literotica.com/s/alice-home-from-the-restaurant
https://www.literotica.com/s/alices-gift
They're all fairly short, and intended more as masturbation fantasies than as short fiction, and what I'm really interested in is whether people can identify with my protagonist.
https://www.literotica.com/s/4-20-p-m
I think it's worse in some ways than my previous pieces, and better in others.
https://www.literotica.com/s/alice-home-from-the-restaurant
https://www.literotica.com/s/alices-gift
They're all fairly short, and intended more as masturbation fantasies than as short fiction, and what I'm really interested in is whether people can identify with my protagonist.