Hot_Sister
Virgin
- Joined
- Jan 31, 2010
- Posts
- 9
I'm a relatively new author to Literotica, but have written six stories in the last couple of months. I didn't use an editor because the two I contacted when I first started didn't respond, so I pressed on. I'm pretty pedantic about my writing so I got by in terms of grammar. The feedback I've had (not that there is very much) has been good.
My stories are all running at between 4.12 and 4.48. I guess this means that more people are voting "4" than "5". I'd really like to have a few of the coveted "H" symbols next to my stories, and I figure there's nothing wrong in striving to be very good, and trying to improve my work.
The trouble is, I don't know how to improve! I'd really appreciate any feedback from anyone who has time to read a bit of my stuff. Is it my style of writing? Am I too long-winded? Is there a formula that I haven't figured out? Maybe I'm on the wrong genre? Maybe I should just stick to my day job!!
All my work up to now has been in the incest category, with brother/sister theme, but within the stories there is consensual m/f and f/f sex with a third party. I try to be realistic, which means 'building the scene' (I think).
You can find me at http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1171352
Hope that someone can give me a clue.....I'd really appreciate your time as I know folk are invariably busy.
Hot_Sister
My stories are all running at between 4.12 and 4.48. I guess this means that more people are voting "4" than "5". I'd really like to have a few of the coveted "H" symbols next to my stories, and I figure there's nothing wrong in striving to be very good, and trying to improve my work.
The trouble is, I don't know how to improve! I'd really appreciate any feedback from anyone who has time to read a bit of my stuff. Is it my style of writing? Am I too long-winded? Is there a formula that I haven't figured out? Maybe I'm on the wrong genre? Maybe I should just stick to my day job!!
All my work up to now has been in the incest category, with brother/sister theme, but within the stories there is consensual m/f and f/f sex with a third party. I try to be realistic, which means 'building the scene' (I think).
You can find me at http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1171352
Hope that someone can give me a clue.....I'd really appreciate your time as I know folk are invariably busy.
Hot_Sister