My first story - feedback appreciated.
I published my first story a few days back and would appreciate any further feedback.
Here's the link -
http://www.literotica.com/s/things-need-to-change-ch-01
P.S : It is a BDSM - femdom story and might not be to everyone's taste. I am currently working on Part 2 of the story.
I published my first story a few days back and would appreciate any further feedback.
Here's the link -
http://www.literotica.com/s/things-need-to-change-ch-01
P.S : It is a BDSM - femdom story and might not be to everyone's taste. I am currently working on Part 2 of the story.
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