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Old 12-11-2016, 10:16 PM   #126
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Ummmm........ let's see .......

Inside:

Hester, Clamont, Tango, Walter, Mango, Grayson, Peepers, Bob, Whisky, Yoda, Wilson, Scruff, Waylon, Camper, Ollie, Buttons, Hekyll, Jekyll, Hyde, Tucker, Mittens and Estoria.

Hekyll and Jekyll might go live with a nephew.

Outside:

Crush, Al, Spanky, Allie, J.J., Puff, Jessie, Cranky, Opie, Beaver, Steve, Darrel, Lenny, Mario, Flash, Sparks, Waldorf, Manny, Psy, Meese, Squint, Fozzi, Kermit, Ren, Stimpy, Gracie, Charles, Nelson, Riley, Squiggy and 4 yet to be named kittens.

56

And that's not counting the others that passed away this year.
Whoa! I don't think I could keep all their names straight...
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Old 12-13-2016, 06:53 AM   #127
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I forgot Shirley outside.
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Old 12-13-2016, 08:53 AM   #128
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Old 12-13-2016, 09:30 AM   #129
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How original.
She actually has a neurological condition known as Cerebellar Hypoplasia, so the name is quite fitting.
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Old 12-13-2016, 09:38 AM   #130
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Allie is healthy as a horse. I sat outside and talked to her for a little while yesterday. She's still just dumb as fuck, which makes me think she'll make it through the cold ok. I explained her options.
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Old 12-13-2016, 10:41 PM   #131
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Who is Bob? I see no Bob.
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Old 12-14-2016, 03:28 PM   #132
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Who is Bob? I see no Bob.
Methinks 'tis a private conversation inadvertently broadcast on the public airways, either way Allie's a dumb fuck, it seems.
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Old 01-09-2017, 08:29 PM   #133
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If I had a dollar for every noobie who pitched a fit over a critique ......


..... I'd make more money than I do writing poetry.
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Old 01-09-2017, 09:01 PM   #134
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If I had a dollar for every noobie who pitched a fit over a critique ......


..... I'd make more money than I do writing poetry.
But such is the trial of genius
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If I had a dollar for every noobie who pitched a fit over a critique ......


..... I'd make more money than I do writing poetry.
He's not a noob, he's our resident troll who keeps getting kicked out then comes back in a different name pretending to look for feedback but really wants the attention! Weird way of getting it!
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Old 01-10-2017, 02:36 AM   #136
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He's not a noob, he's our resident troll who keeps getting kicked out then comes back in a different name pretending to look for feedback but really wants the attention! Weird way of getting it!
If that's true, then he nailed his performance.
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If that's true, then he nailed his performance.
Give it a while and he'll be at it again.
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Old 01-11-2017, 08:20 AM   #138
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Give it a while and he'll be at it again.
Let's hope he takes our advice and at least improves his poetry.

I'd say he's mastered Basic Trolling.
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Old 01-11-2017, 09:37 AM   #139
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Let's hope he takes our advice and at least improves his poetry.

I'd say he's mastered Basic Trolling.
Likely the only thing he's master of.
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Old 01-11-2017, 08:24 PM   #140
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Likely the only thing he's master of.
Unless his surname's Bates
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If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
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Old 01-12-2017, 02:35 AM   #141
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Unless his surname's Bates
Not sure I'd give him enough credit to have mastered that either.
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Old 01-12-2017, 10:20 AM   #142
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When your inner editor tops erotica

Came across this sentence in the first sentence of a new story

"He a Venetian creature of poised, rigid marble—almost indiscernibly human unless, like she, you caught the slightest flicker of his silvery eyes."


and immediately hit BACK.
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Came across this sentence in the first sentence of a new story

"He a Venetian creature of poised, rigid marble—almost indiscernibly human unless, like she, you caught the slightest flicker of his silvery eyes."


and immediately hit BACK.
Sounds like one of those men that stand motionless in Mediterranean marketplaces and only moves if you put money in his bowl!
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Not sure I'd give him enough credit to have mastered that either.
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Although it doesn't happen a lot, I do enjoy finding new talent in "New Poems."
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I'm enjoying Piscator's 30-in-30 run, and the bird pics - a lovely combination
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I'm enjoying Piscator's 30-in-30 run, and the bird pics - a lovely combination
I second that, well done
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I second that, well done
Thanks Mer and Annie,

January 1 spurs us into actions we may regret but it can get us moving. The bird feeder came up amongst my second day second thoughts (why did I start this?) and has been a useful thread to follow and it does give a chance to share some of the many splendid pics available on the web.
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Angeline, your poetry is ethereal whereas mine is so solid .......... sigh.
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Angeline, your poetry is ethereal whereas mine is so solid .......... sigh.
I think yours is clear and mine vague. It's all in the perspective!
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