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Old 01-12-2017, 12:17 AM   #1
GudTimes256
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Editor For My First Series

Hello,

After publishing parts 1 and 2 of my first series (Title:Losing Han, Category:Mind Control) without an editor, I thought I'd try one to see if it helps with my story (spelling, grammar, and sentence structure primarily, but if there is any thoughts/criticism/confusion on the story and/or characterization, I would be grateful to listen).

The story is about a man who drugs his wife to have her perform sex acts she would not normally do, but the wife is than further drugged by an ex who wants her for himself. And it gets worse for the husband and wife from there. If you like the first two parts and want to help edit the next three written (each part is approximately the same length as 1 and 2), PM me.

https://www.literotica.com/s/losing-han
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