Old 05-16-2018, 06:44 PM   #1
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Most Personal Story

This is the first story I've written in a while (the others I've published were written years before the Literotica publishing date listed). It was a long time coming and is the most personal I've written.

I'd be interested in reader feedback/comments/etc. either here or at the end of the story.

https://www.literotica.com/s/so-intimate

Thanks!

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Old 05-16-2018, 07:02 PM   #2
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I thought it was lovely. I left a comment and rated it a 5.
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Old 05-22-2018, 11:24 PM   #3
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I thought it was lovely. I left a comment and rated it a 5.
Thank you so much Melissa! I so appreciate you taking the time to read it.

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Old 05-23-2018, 06:55 AM   #4
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Thank you so much Melissa! I so appreciate you taking the time to read it.

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I know from my own experience how frightening, yet how exhilarating, it is to write such a personal story. Congratulations on not only putting yourself out there for readers, but for doing it so eloquently.
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Old 05-23-2018, 07:02 AM   #5
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Hello Erica, I want to read it but I can't right now, so I'll just post here for a reminder: I'll be back to you

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Old 05-23-2018, 09:26 AM   #6
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Lesbian stories hold no interest for me so initially I gave this one a miss. I have no idea what age group is the norm in stories in this category.

I surprisingly found it enjoyable, probably because the ladies are middle aged.

In fact the only reason I read it at all was because I saw Melissa had given it a favourable response. Even so I was surprised I actually got to the end.
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This is the first story I've written in a while (the others I've published were written years before the Literotica publishing date listed). It was a long time coming and is the most personal I've written.

I'd be interested in reader feedback/comments/etc. either here or at the end of the story.

https://www.literotica.com/s/so-intimate

Thanks!

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What kind of feedback would you like? Just thoughts and comments?
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Old 05-23-2018, 10:44 PM   #9
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I enjoyed so many parts of this story. I loved the slow build up. I loved the way they’d met and the allusion to things they’d chatted about online. I loved the invitation to explore the others house because that’s a true sign of intimacy.

I was really drawn to the discussion between them on their body issues. I will qualify the fact that I am a man and women of virtually all descriptions are beautiful to me. But you dealt with body issues in a very realistic and open-minded way. I loved that.

I read story in the backseat of a very bumpy truck on the way home tonight. After I can read it again under more sedate circumstances, I will comment directly to the story. Look forward to more submisssions.
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