Old 07-18-2017, 08:39 AM   #1
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TVG7A0ID9vY

KEEP IT STRAIGHT like the lady says.
 

Old 07-18-2017, 08:53 AM   #2
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yOgrqZs2L2k

Here's how she does it. Prose should do the same. Prose is sound in your head, too.

If your prose dony blah blah blah blah blah youre doing something right, so go read a LIT story and start over.
 

Old 07-18-2017, 12:21 PM   #3
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Isn't she fucking brilliant. 'If you do it like that it just becomes dead.'

Exactly.
 

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Few writers have a sense of how long to make a scene. So stretch those inane scenes out and abbreviate what mmaters to readers.
 

Old 07-19-2017, 10:01 AM   #7
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Old 07-19-2017, 01:24 PM   #8
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I'll look at it this afternoon after I get home.
I'm still waitubg for the threads you promise to launch, youre all talk.
 
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