Old 01-01-2015, 03:03 PM   #476
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Sorry I deserted you again, I'm not so well these days. Now let me see what I can bamboozle you with
Hmmmm form eh Charley? these will send you all scurrying off to read up your forms

Charley an autobiographical Cento

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I tell you what you write them and for setting you all those forms I'll match you form for form!
A cento, I can do. I've never attempted one before, but I think I can do a good one along this line.

I also think I promised mine by the end of this week, but I'll need to extend it to at least next weekend since I'll be getting back to my regularly scheduled program tomorrow. And, by the way? I'll hold you to that, UYS!
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Old 01-01-2015, 11:02 PM   #477
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A cento, I can do. I've never attempted one before, but I think I can do a good one along this line.

I also think I promised mine by the end of this week, but I'll need to extend it to at least next weekend since I'll be getting back to my regularly scheduled program tomorrow. And, by the way? I'll hold you to that, UYS!
I think I must have posted that during a period of delirium caused by the 19 pills I now take a day!!
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Old 01-03-2015, 02:48 PM   #478
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I think I must have posted that during a period of delirium caused by the 19 pills I now take a day!!
I'm still holding you to your promise, whenever you can write. I'm all over this tonight, though. Changing my pic to reflect a bit of whose work I'm currently considering.
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Old 01-11-2015, 12:21 AM   #479
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Blessed are the cracked for it is they that let in the light
They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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Old 01-18-2015, 12:52 AM   #480
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Willo a Tritina (your choice of subject as I'm not sure how you are with forms)
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Wood You

Mother's dearest, you have come early to prey.
Oh, how you sauntered smiling into the wood
where lived a beast in every tale told you.

Your torn dress I'll leave by the tallest yew
with that little blood so that mother will pray
harder still when you saunter smiling from the wood

for breakfast, with gripping new tales that would
ill-fit the forests of yesterday. And you
will smile with teeth now as to mother say "Pray

you not for me. I'm preyed already. And tonight I would beast."
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Thank you UnderYourSpell. Hope this suffices. I took some homophone liberties.

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Old 01-18-2015, 12:59 AM   #481
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Wood You

Mother's dearest, you have come early to prey.
Oh, how you sauntered smiling into the wood
where lived a beast in every tale told you.

Your torn dress I'll leave by the tallest yew
with that little blood so that mother will pray
harder still when you saunter smiling from the wood

for breakfast, with gripping new tales that would
ill-fit the forests of yesterday. And you
will smile with teeth now as to mother say "Pray

you not for me. I'm preyed already. And tonight I would beast."
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Thank you UnderYourSpell. Hope this suffices. I took some homophone liberties.

May I have another?
Really enjoyed this and the homophone word plays are great. Nice to read you again.
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They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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Champ a Triolet about food.<snip>
I tell you what you write them and for setting you all those forms I'll match you form for form!
I shall try to find a key line to build a triolet on... lol get ready UYS
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Old 06-11-2016, 11:21 PM   #484
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For whoever wants to re-open this thread your task is to write a Villanelle from the view point of your knife and fork!
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If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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For whoever wants to re-open this thread your task is to write a Villanelle from the view point of your knife and fork!
You're on.......let's eat!
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You're on.......let's eat!
Oh goodness a taker! I shall have to swat up on my forms!
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But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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Knife and Fork......

....or Rivalry in the Cutlery Canteen

We work in partnership ‘tho seldom meet
but neither can we do our jobs alone,
a hand to hold us makes our team complete.


We know we must be edgy and elite,
our handles often ivory or bone.
We work in partnership but seldom meet


Not needed to eat soup or cream of wheat,
we keep our council, lying distant, prone.
No hand to hold us, team is incomplete.


“Knife cuts me” whines fork “and finds me effete.”
“little does knife know but we’re all a clone,
we work in partnership and seldom meet”


The cutlery wars rage on, no defeat.
Our canteen is shattered, its cover blown,
a hand to hold us makes our team complete.


Victory’s easy but so bittersweet,
beating my drawer-mate, my sharp chaperone.
We work in partnership but seldom meet
a hand to hold us makes our team complete.
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....or Rivalry in the Cutlery Canteen

We work in partnership ‘tho seldom meet
but neither can we do our jobs alone,
a hand to hold us makes our team complete.


We know we must be edgy and elite,
our handles often ivory or bone.
We work in partnership but seldom meet


Not needed to eat soup or cream of wheat,
we keep our council, lying distant, prone.
No hand to hold us, team is incomplete.


“Knife cuts me” whines fork “and finds me effete.”
“little does knife know but we’re all a clone,
we work in partnership and seldom meet”


The cutlery wars rage on, no defeat.
Our canteen is shattered, its cover blown,
a hand to hold us makes our team complete.


Victory’s easy but so bittersweet,
beating my drawer-mate, my sharp chaperone.
We work in partnership but seldom meet
a hand to hold us makes our team complete.
Applause
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If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
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Old 06-17-2016, 04:49 PM   #491
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nice one, the metaphor carried well in the form :goldstar: :waves:
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nice one, the metaphor carried well in the form :goldstar: :waves:
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