DarkSideHidden
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Need Mother / Son Editor
Hi! I am a first-time writer looking for guidance on a mother son story. I need someone to critique basic grammar and punctuation. I am open to suggestions on character development, flow, plot, and overall eroticism. I am going for realistic and honest. I see this story evolving as the main characters continue to find themselves struggling with their emotions. The son's loneliness and the mom’s maternal instinct to help and nurture. This is just the start.
Thank you for your time in advance and I hope to hear from you soon. PM me if interested.
28 pages in Word - 14,300 words
-DSH
Hi! I am a first-time writer looking for guidance on a mother son story. I need someone to critique basic grammar and punctuation. I am open to suggestions on character development, flow, plot, and overall eroticism. I am going for realistic and honest. I see this story evolving as the main characters continue to find themselves struggling with their emotions. The son's loneliness and the mom’s maternal instinct to help and nurture. This is just the start.
Thank you for your time in advance and I hope to hear from you soon. PM me if interested.
28 pages in Word - 14,300 words
-DSH
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