old_and_shy
Really Experienced
- Joined
- Aug 4, 2014
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Hi all,
I have a story (my first for Literotica) that could use another set of eyes before being released into the wild.
About me: I've been writing fan fiction (Farscape, Friends, Big Bang Theory) for about eight years, but this is my first original story. I'm Dutch, but I seem to be unable to write stories in any language other than English (I blame fan fiction, 'cause I can only 'hear' the characters talking English, so writing them in Dutch while staying true to the character is impossible). My English is pretty good, but not perfect; I know I make silly mistakes from time to time, that someone who uses English every day would simply not make.
About the story: 7600 words, sibling incest (didn't start out as such, but rarely do my stories end up the way I had envisioned them when I started) / first time (for him) / hurt/comfort.
What I hope you'd be able to do for me: fix any grammatical mistakes, flag issues you might spot in either dialog or plot. In general, help me make the story better.
I'd prefer a female editor (helps me to get the female perspective right), but that's just because I'm used to have women telling me what I could do to improve either the story or my writing.
I have a story (my first for Literotica) that could use another set of eyes before being released into the wild.
About me: I've been writing fan fiction (Farscape, Friends, Big Bang Theory) for about eight years, but this is my first original story. I'm Dutch, but I seem to be unable to write stories in any language other than English (I blame fan fiction, 'cause I can only 'hear' the characters talking English, so writing them in Dutch while staying true to the character is impossible). My English is pretty good, but not perfect; I know I make silly mistakes from time to time, that someone who uses English every day would simply not make.
About the story: 7600 words, sibling incest (didn't start out as such, but rarely do my stories end up the way I had envisioned them when I started) / first time (for him) / hurt/comfort.
What I hope you'd be able to do for me: fix any grammatical mistakes, flag issues you might spot in either dialog or plot. In general, help me make the story better.
I'd prefer a female editor (helps me to get the female perspective right), but that's just because I'm used to have women telling me what I could do to improve either the story or my writing.
