Feedback for Newbie - Text with Audio Critique

Hello, I am new to the forums but have been posting my erotic audios for 6 months.
I am looking for some feedback/constructive criticism on my works (new and old) before moving forward.
I would also like to engage with others but need a starting point. All suggestions are welcome.
Thank you so much for the help.
Xoxo Ben. (InMyHands)

I wouldn't mind some reading and I like giving feedback and ideas

OP's story file:

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=3246322&page=submissions

Tell people what kind of material you do, is always a good idea. I see your profile is Daddy- Dom, for those curious (not to everyone's taste, but then, nothing is).