LoquiSordidaAdMe
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Like most of the posters in here, I'm a first time author looking for the right editor.
I've written a short (15 pg .doc) story about about two college girls and an older man. I'd put it in the Group Sex category. There's also a bit of Romance, and bit of First Time, and a bit of Incest (but not really). It's all consensual. No BDSM or scat. There's lots of dialogue. It's a complete story that I don't plan to expand.
I'd like a second set of eyes to catch any spelling, punctuation, or grammatical errors of course. But I'd also like to know if the story has any weak spots - anything that would pull the reader out of the story, or that comes off as cheesy, or just factually inaccurate. I'm hoping to find an editor who can spot those issues.
So... Anyone interested? Thanks in advance.
I've written a short (15 pg .doc) story about about two college girls and an older man. I'd put it in the Group Sex category. There's also a bit of Romance, and bit of First Time, and a bit of Incest (but not really). It's all consensual. No BDSM or scat. There's lots of dialogue. It's a complete story that I don't plan to expand.
I'd like a second set of eyes to catch any spelling, punctuation, or grammatical errors of course. But I'd also like to know if the story has any weak spots - anything that would pull the reader out of the story, or that comes off as cheesy, or just factually inaccurate. I'm hoping to find an editor who can spot those issues.
So... Anyone interested? Thanks in advance.
