New Story: Naturally Luscious

[Shendude]

So, despite the abject failure of my previous attempts at CHYOO stories, I'm giving it another try. 'Tis entitled Naturally Luscious and is based on this video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ck14LKBI9GM

Currently, it consists of the introductory post and an OOC character list.

The former is pretty crappy; I was perhaps a tad overenthusiastic and put it up before I'd thought it through sufficiently. I intend to edit it into a less crappy form once I figure out how. Currently, it's a short paragraph explaining that there's an island inhabited by sexy furries due to magic fruit, and three even shorter paragraphs, each describing a character about to start doing something sexy. I'm planning on making additions that expand on each of them.

The Character list is pretty bare bones, containing simply a list of characters and links to images of them. I made up some (very minor) characterization for a few, but only a few. I suppose I could make this better too, but again, I'm not sure how.

Any thought/suggestions?

[Shendude]

And here's an addition: http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main....163595/0/s_032, following the Bear character wondering whether to watch or join a trio of beauties.

I'm not planning on expanding this branch yet; I want to start up two more first.

[Shendude]

Heh, waddaya know, someone else added to it: http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.page/163609 Was not expecting that.

Anyways, new branch, starring the Tiger character. Mentions a bunch of females, some of which are mentioned doing other things in the intro and the other branch, but it's not like inter-branch continuity is necessary.

[Menoetes]

Not my cup of tea but certainly original and full of possibilities. Best of luck with it man, I hope it goes well and picks up some co-authors along the way.

[Shendude]

Originally Posted by Menoetes

Not my cup of tea but certainly original and full of possibilities. Best of luck with it man, I hope it goes well and picks up some co-authors along the way.

Truthfully, it isn't normally my cup of tea either. But that vid...

EDIT: Oh, and I added to Erosword's branch: http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main..../163689/163689

[Shendude]

So, since Erosword didn't, I added to my response to his addition: http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main..../164447/164447

And while I was at it, I also added to the other branch about the Bear, Doe, Flamingo, and Lilac characters: http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main..../164448/164447

In addition, I started two additional branches, one starring the Chamelon, Dolphin, and Palm characters (http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.page/164458), and the other starring the Puma, Panther, and Octopus characters (http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.page/164457).

All in all, a very productive day.

[Shendude]

And Erosword has now added to to my addition to his thread/branch/whatever: http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main..../164606/162911

[Shendude]

And in a rebuke of my negligence, since I have not done so in an overly-long period of time, Erosword has added to his thread: http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main..../166868/162911

[Shendude]

And yet again, Erosword has picked up the slack from me: http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main..../167901/162911

I really need to get with the program.

[MistyHaze]

A very interesting concept using animals in a almost human sexual way. I need more time to read it all through, because it does spark my desire to know more.

I'm new to the site, and I'm not sure what's going yet...Misty

[MistyHaze]

I luv your sketch...very sensual.

[Shendude]

Originally Posted by MistyHaze

A very interesting concept using animals in a almost human sexual way. I need more time to read it all through, because it does spark my desire to know more.

I'm new to the site, and I'm not sure what's going yet...Misty

Thanks. Apologies for taking so long to respond.

Originally Posted by MistyHaze

I luv your sketch...very sensual.

Were you referring to my Avatar? I liked it too, which is why I picked it, though I've since changed it, as I do every month.

I didn't make it though; I don't recall exactly where it came from but IIRC, it was concept art from an attempt at making an animated fan film based on Edgar Rice Burroughs' Barsoom stories.

[Shendude]

And lo and behold, I have finally added to it myself, by expanding on Erosword's thread dealing with Tiger: http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main..../168319/162911