OMGURNaked
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I am looking for an editor. This story will be my first attempt at writing.
My story is about a girl who gets excited when she is sexually embarrassed. Her boyfriend helps set up an exciting day for her where she gets exposed. The main theme of the story is exhibitionism and it is about 9,000 words in length.
I don't think my spelling and grammar are too bad but there is always room for improvement. I would especially like some assistance with structure. A lot of things happen in the story so I struggle with how much detail to include to balance realism while keeping the reader's interest.
Eventually, this story is going to be a series. The second part is already written by I need to re-read it a few more times before submitting it for editing. There is also a third part which is almost complete and a fourth in the planning stages.
Any assistance would be appreciated.
Update: I've found an editor. Thanks.
My story is about a girl who gets excited when she is sexually embarrassed. Her boyfriend helps set up an exciting day for her where she gets exposed. The main theme of the story is exhibitionism and it is about 9,000 words in length.
I don't think my spelling and grammar are too bad but there is always room for improvement. I would especially like some assistance with structure. A lot of things happen in the story so I struggle with how much detail to include to balance realism while keeping the reader's interest.
Eventually, this story is going to be a series. The second part is already written by I need to re-read it a few more times before submitting it for editing. There is also a third part which is almost complete and a fourth in the planning stages.
Any assistance would be appreciated.
Update: I've found an editor. Thanks.
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