Hi!
I just finished the third part of my cuckold/BDSM/bi/fetish story "Fag Boys Suck" and I came to a conclusion that I could really use an editor.
English is not my mother tongue, and I think that you can tell that from my writing. So, I would kindly ask for you friendly Literotica VA souls to help me out
The story has about 2000 words.
I think that my greatest weakness is grammar actually, so I would really like some help with that - but if you have the time or will - any other suggestions would also be helpful to me and will be taken into consideration, of course.
The links for part one and two:
https://www.literotica.com/s/fag-boys-suck
https://www.literotica.com/s/fag-boys-suck-ch-02
Bye!
I just finished the third part of my cuckold/BDSM/bi/fetish story "Fag Boys Suck" and I came to a conclusion that I could really use an editor.
English is not my mother tongue, and I think that you can tell that from my writing. So, I would kindly ask for you friendly Literotica VA souls to help me out
The story has about 2000 words.I think that my greatest weakness is grammar actually, so I would really like some help with that - but if you have the time or will - any other suggestions would also be helpful to me and will be taken into consideration, of course.
The links for part one and two:
https://www.literotica.com/s/fag-boys-suck
https://www.literotica.com/s/fag-boys-suck-ch-02
Bye!
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