looking for an editor

I have finished part one of a three or four part story and am seeking an editor. My story is approx. 3000 words and is about a women's first time at a swingers/bsdm club. My story was rejected due to punctuation issues and I need assistance in revising it.

Thanks

First, you need to enable PMs. Here are the instructions:

* To switch on your Private Messages, go to User CP (top left of this page), click on Edit Options (in the left hand column), and then tick Enable Private Messaging in the second box down. Make sure that the next box down (Receive Private Messages only from Buddies and Moderators) is NOT ticked. Finally, click Save Changes at the bottom of that page.

ok, done.