ms_gangbang
Virgin
- Joined
- May 3, 2015
- Posts
- 3
Send me your stories and get them edited within 2 days.
Free to edit all December
- Thread starter ms_gangbang
- Start date
Tigersman
Literotica Guru
- Joined
- Jun 3, 2014
- Posts
- 4,127
Glamour Model
I only read about half a page of this story before I found an error. Tiffany is told she needs to go into a small room and undress in front of Ms Smidge. Tiffany says she has heard about cameras being in places like that. She is told the room has only a chair and a hangar for her clothes. This small room must be at least the size of a football stadium to be able to have a "hangar" in it, as a "hangar" houses airplanes, not clothes.
Even going over a story twice, it's still possible to miss things from time to time.
I only read about half a page of this story before I found an error. Tiffany is told she needs to go into a small room and undress in front of Ms Smidge. Tiffany says she has heard about cameras being in places like that. She is told the room has only a chair and a hangar for her clothes. This small room must be at least the size of a football stadium to be able to have a "hangar" in it, as a "hangar" houses airplanes, not clothes.
Even going over a story twice, it's still possible to miss things from time to time.
I
Iceprincess12
Guest
Will you post this under story feedback as well as the category? Since it's been edited several times I assume it's a smooth read and I enjoy editing for content.
