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Old 11-12-2013, 08:31 AM   #1
renorwood
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Talking Request for feedback - Anal

Hi all,

My second chapter was approved in a series I'm writing. It's in a different category than the first. I would appreciate any feedback you have to offer.

http://www.literotica.com/s/innocent-foot-rub-ch-02

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Old 11-17-2013, 05:31 AM   #2
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Story is nice. Amanda does wonderful actually I wish you continued with all the Anal fantasy Meanwhile, please do let me know few links for the best Anal episodes in Literotica.

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Old 11-18-2013, 03:14 PM   #3
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Great read, thanks.
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Old 11-20-2013, 11:51 AM   #4
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Pretty damn good, sexy story and good writing.
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