lizzystein
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- Jul 15, 2014
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Here is the link to the second part of my first story:
http://www.literotica.com/s/nightclub-ch-01
It is called Nightclub, and it is posted in the BDSM section, although it might have been more appropriate in the Reluctance/Non-consent category. I have applied to change the link address, but I will edit this post when that happens.
I would love feedback before I start writing a second submission.
(The first part of the story is over here: http://www.literotica.com/s/nightclub-1 )
Thanks in advance for any response!
http://www.literotica.com/s/nightclub-ch-01
It is called Nightclub, and it is posted in the BDSM section, although it might have been more appropriate in the Reluctance/Non-consent category. I have applied to change the link address, but I will edit this post when that happens.
I would love feedback before I start writing a second submission.
(The first part of the story is over here: http://www.literotica.com/s/nightclub-1 )
Thanks in advance for any response!