ElectricBlue
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Heat is hot, no matter what the colour .Incidentally, “She was not classically beautiful…” is my way of saying “I think she’s sexy, although I have a feeling not many people would agree with me on that”.
Maybe, see how it reads with every adverb and adjective removed (ie: bare bones, or more accurately, bare skin) and judiciously add one or two back. See it as adding salt, pinch by pinch, to cooking. Not throwing in the whole jar!